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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Bottled Up Emotions-Ch1

    Buenos Dias! So I was scrolling through the green room and your title caught my eye, so here I am. Now, on to reviewing. 1. To start with There are ...

    Mar 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: him..

    I really liked this poem. You use a lot really descriptive writing, doing that usually adds a lot to a poem, and yours is no exception. I like the whole ...

    Mar 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: What's the point?

    To start with, you title really caught my eye. I know I have started writing poems by this title many times, but they always end up with me staring at ...

    Mar 25, 2016
  • Script » General, General Re: Done

    That was the most amazing script I have read so far. You seriously gave it a lot. Other than the repetition problem, which is not the worst problem you can ...

    Mar 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: angel

    This was really interesting, still is actually. When I first read it, I found it a little confusing. I was having trouble understanding be, because at first you write about ...

    Mar 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Life

    Hello! So first off, great job! Congratulations! You've written your first poem, you've breached a new art. Now that you've gotten your first poem out of the way, you have ...

    Mar 17, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Space, and the horrifying implications of traveling through it without a permit.(First Paragraph)

    Hello! Today you have put before us a extremely palatable prologue of the most admirable and intriguing kind. It has spiked my interests in an extremely compelling way, for this ...

    Mar 17, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Moms Can Be Annoying

    Hello again! I'm here to review So get ready While I explain to you I totally get you man She is pretty weird She is like a adrenalin junky And ...

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Those Days

    This poem is very interesting I think it says a lot. It speaks of all the changes right now And whether you like them or not. So welcome to life ...

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Lost Girl

    Hello! This story is very interesting, but there are a few things about it that threw me off. First of all, how you formatted this is hard to read. I ...

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Masks

    Oh hey, here I have found life all summed up in a short story. First off, this is pretty well written, you certainty have a way with words. And there ...

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Health, Culture Re: test

    Ahem, assumes false professors voice this work was really lovely. The font was easy to read, the colors really popped out of my screen, I loved it! Your word choice ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 34

    Um, hi.. I'm a little all over the place and am not totally sure how I can possibly review this. It is so heart wrenching really, between Megan having ended ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 32

    I guess I won't have to kill you now.... This chapter was... Relieving. I don't know why, but it was. It just gave a sense of calm and.. I am ...

    Feb 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The Modern Frankenstien

    smashesheadintodeskrepeatedlyandviolently I feel like a jerk now; you asked me to review/take a look at this a really long time ago; and I may or may not have I totally ...

    Feb 22, 2016


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price