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Re: Bottled Up Emotions-Ch1
Buenos Dias! So I was scrolling through the green room and your title caught my eye, so here I am. Now, on to reviewing. 1. To start with There are ...
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: him..
I really liked this poem. You use a lot really descriptive writing, doing that usually adds a lot to a poem, and yours is no exception. I like the whole ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: What's the point?
To start with, you title really caught my eye. I know I have started writing poems by this title many times, but they always end up with me staring at ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: Done
That was the most amazing script I have read so far. You seriously gave it a lot. Other than the repetition problem, which is not the worst problem you can ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: angel
This was really interesting, still is actually. When I first read it, I found it a little confusing. I was having trouble understanding be, because at first you write about ...
Mar 25, 2016 -
Re: Life
Hello! So first off, great job! Congratulations! You've written your first poem, you've breached a new art. Now that you've gotten your first poem out of the way, you have ...
Mar 17, 2016 -
Re: Space, and the horrifying implications of traveling through it without a permit.(First Paragraph)
Hello! Today you have put before us a extremely palatable prologue of the most admirable and intriguing kind. It has spiked my interests in an extremely compelling way, for this ...
Mar 17, 2016 -
Re: Moms Can Be Annoying
Hello again! I'm here to review So get ready While I explain to you I totally get you man She is pretty weird She is like a adrenalin junky And ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: Those Days
This poem is very interesting I think it says a lot. It speaks of all the changes right now And whether you like them or not. So welcome to life ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: Lost Girl
Hello! This story is very interesting, but there are a few things about it that threw me off. First of all, how you formatted this is hard to read. I ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: Masks
Oh hey, here I have found life all summed up in a short story. First off, this is pretty well written, you certainty have a way with words. And there ...
Mar 15, 2016 -
Re: test
Ahem, assumes false professors voice this work was really lovely. The font was easy to read, the colors really popped out of my screen, I loved it! Your word choice ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 34
Um, hi.. I'm a little all over the place and am not totally sure how I can possibly review this. It is so heart wrenching really, between Megan having ended ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: Taste of Life - Chapter 32
I guess I won't have to kill you now.... This chapter was... Relieving. I don't know why, but it was. It just gave a sense of calm and.. I am ...
Feb 29, 2016 -
Re: The Modern Frankenstien
smashesheadintodeskrepeatedlyandviolently I feel like a jerk now; you asked me to review/take a look at this a really long time ago; and I may or may not have I totally ...
Feb 22, 2016
