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Re: Glass Wall
Good day my friend, This is a lovely piece of work, i like your concept of a glass wall. I think your usage of the glass wall is interesting, because ...
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: Existential Being Poems by Imelda Margoth
Good day Imelda Margoth, First off, welcome to the family! We're so happy to have you here and see what awesome works of literary genius you come out with! Now ...
Jan 26, 2018 -
Re: I want to be a Christian
Good day Radrook! This poem is very relevant both to society today, as well as to the short comings of the modern church. For example, when my father was a ...
Jan 26, 2018 -
Re: Love: A Poem in Three Parts
Wow. I know that is not a greeting, but it's the only thing my brain can come forth with right now. You are a fantastic writer, your way of articulating ...
Jan 26, 2018 -
Re: Those Words...
Buenos dias jemming17, I'd like to start right in by saying that I love your concept. Although the topic of love is very overwritten, it still never ceases to intrigue ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: Phases of a girls life
Buenas dias/tardes my friend, You have a very interesting piece here. Your concept is good, and I like the idea you're trying to convey. However; your grammar is quite lacking. ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: Edenic
Once again, buenos tardes Radrook! I really enjoyed the content of this work. As a girl raised Christian from birth, the story of Adam and Eve is a familiar one. ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: Meeting the Enemy
Buenos tardes Radrook, I really love your writing. Every work I've read has been a whole new adventure. In this work, your sentences are chock full of adjectives. The first ...
Jan 9, 2018 -
Re: Dog
Yet another work added to your mass, I love it. All of these are written really well, so it's a pleasure to read and review them. I like how you ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: Matter Out of Place
Wow, this is fantastic. I'm not even quite sure where to start, I've read it over at least three times now, and every time more and more pops out at ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: midterms
What a stressful piece, every word is crammed with tension. Have you ever seen a cheetah seconds before it takes off? Every muscle tensed, straining, quivering right before it explodes ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: End
Goodnight (and just why can't I use goodnight as a hello instead of goodbye, goodmorning does it so well) I really loved this, and I think I understand it. As ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: Sorry
Hello my dear, let's start right in. To begin with, this poem is an interesting concept. It starts in the title and then build from there. However, it didn't seem ...
Dec 20, 2017 -
Re: What Happened
Goodmorning (or as morning as 2 am is it isn't) To begin with, I have to offer you my greatest praise towards your courage. I recently broke off a relationship ...
Dec 17, 2017 -
Re: yellow paint
Goodmorning (or as morning as 1:45 a.m is or isn't), Let's start right in with some encouragement! I like this piece as a concept, it's like a simplified algebraic expression; ...
Dec 17, 2017
