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I thought that it was an interesting take on the topic. It is a little dark at the end, so it was interesting. I like how you said: "Be it ...

I like the theme, I could relate to the first five lines. I like how when you wrote "Freedom in colored pencil and ink," to me it was implied that ...

It has short, strong stanza's and a great topic. This had my interest as soon as I started to read. I like the that you have a life planned for ...

The theme of this poem is in fact about unreachable dreams. Some writers are a little random with themes. This is an interesting poem because it has a story to ...

It has several points to improve on, but it was interesting. I think that your theme of darkness is interesting, but this poem can feel a little scary to young ...

Teenagers have always been influenced by the internet. Your poem states how you feel when that influence was taken away. The part about god not being pleased was a little ...

I am just going to be honest. I didn't fully understand the first stanza. The whole part about tears is a little confusing. I think that the second stanza is ...

It feels like you are watching a movie. It felt like it was being described to me. I like how you described the emotion in detail. The paragraphs were all ...

This is a really cool and I think that it would be a nice song. I like how you compared life to several things. You compared life to: A dream, ...

Very short.Never enough. Wanting more. Can't because you stopped too soon for me. Feeling sad, and tables are harmless. Harmless I tell you! Complex in meaning but short in the ...

The whales are a good metaphor for a song. The dream is interesting, I never thought that the dreams of a person could be that creepy. The quiet of no ...

Fire is a tool not to be misused! I feel that it is used to be for warmth and life not destruction. This is a statement in which fire is ...

I think that everyone should be treated equally! Everyone can feel this way, and I don't think that anyone is amused, or adored. Don't beat yourself up about it. You ...

I like the principal of the poem. The name is confusing. Men and women can build but we can also destroy. I like the statement about the blue-green light. Dogs ...

Everyone has a moment, I like how you found yours. I think that every moment is special and that good or bad, you can try to get your way out ...