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Re: if this is when i fall in love
Hello!! Authorian here for a review! This is such a beautiful poem! I loved the different stanzas and flowing, shifting style. It reminded me a lot of when me and ...
Aug 7, 2017 -
Re: a (hundred) thousand years
Hello! I loved this! Like really loved this! The pacing, description, story, everything! It's so captivating and unique! This is one of the best pieces I've read in awhile. I ...
Aug 7, 2017 -
Re: Anticipation for Death
Hello!! Authorian here for a review :) First of all, this poem is fairly general, from what I understand. Keep in mind, poetry is a very personal art form, and ...
Aug 5, 2017 -
Re: Abused
Hello! Authorian here for a review! First off, this poem made me feel something. I've recently been rejected and hurt by a friend so it was like hearing myself, which ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: colors of him
What an interesting little story! It flows beautifully, and is short and sweet :) I enjoyed the theme of color and light through the whole thing, it gave it flow. ...
Dec 22, 2016 -
Re: social suicide
Hello! Authorian here to review~~~ First off, welcome to The Young Writers Society! Otherwise known as YWS. I'm sure you'll enjoy your time here (: Secondly, let me just say ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: Dreams Do Come True
Greetings H3AL1NGW1NGS and welcome to The Young Writer's Society! I'm sure you'll love this site (: My name is Authorian and I'm here to review your summary here~~ As Wolfie ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: 12/20/15
Hello! Authorian here for a review~~~ This is a great poem! I'm sure your (boyfriend?) loved it! It was a great read and made me smile. You should definitely keep ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: The Window View
Hello! Authorian here for a review! Wow. You have an absolutely amazing talent for writing. You're only fifteen? Wow. Welcome to The Young Writers Society as well! I'm sure you ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: Writer's Block
Hello! Authorian here for a revieww~~ First off, I can totally relate. This reminds me of so many unfortunate nights. (By the way, I hope you get over your writers ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: Morning Already?
Hello!! Authorian here for a reviewww! This is such a beautiful poem. It's not too long, nor too short. It definitely feels like something you did for fun (in a ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: Two Minutes
Hello! Authorian here for a reviewww~~~~ This is such a beautiful poem! I always love your style. It's interesting, in the way it's formatted. And I especially loved the part ...
Dec 27, 2015 -
Re: The Beauty of Educational Prison
Hello, Authorian here for a revewww~~ Wow. This is such a powerful message. It speaks to me on how schools really are nowadays. It's a good message and you presented ...
Dec 27, 2015 -
Re: Let her go
Hello and welcome to The Young Writers Society! Lovely poem! I don't know if this is from personal experience or not, but it's beautiful either way. I can feel the ...
Dec 27, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1- Autumn
Hello! Authorian here for a review~~ First off, beautiful story! The narration and prose is captivating. You have a great talent for writing! Second, I'd recommend proofreading your writing just ...
Dec 27, 2015
