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Euh, je ne sais pas comment revue de poésie. Parce que cela arrive dans toutes les sortes, donc je vais le laisser pour les professionnels. Anywhos, je l'ai aimé. Il ...

Bonjour Dalliance, d'une part, les capitales utiliser pour vos commandes. Cela peut sembler assez d'avoir tout en minuscules, mais il ya des tas de ballots de ponctuation ici et ils ...

That night, I watched myself die. Absolutely love this opening sentence. However something seems a bit off-key, the way it's structured. Maybe you could change it to: "I watched myself ...

- I dream about them still being here and seeing my sister’s face again, my second mum too. I don't quite understand exactly how your sister and second mum have ...

1. Because the earth isn't spinning fast enough and I'm barely holding on to the soil dipping my toes in gorilla glue just to be safe to be attached to ...

Suicide and Compromise, everything I refuse to hide, is showing...on your beautiful face. Lovers lost, the new holocaust. Something tells me I can't go on; without you. Gliding on this ...

Pretty cool poem :P Together we stand, together we rise, as we see into our fiery demise. Your eyes, your face, I am in love, but now, you're pale, as ...

Oh my goodness. I loved this! Absolutely. And I couldn't find anything wrong with it :D The flow was perfect, and it gave off a great feeling towards the end. ...

I rarely write poems so if you must tear it to shreds for my awful work please do. Untitled My angry thoughts are left to? ferment. My patients patience is ...

I really liked this! I can totally relate to loud silence, it happens too often in my house TT_TT Anyways, I was slightly confused at how his flesh fell off ...

Zomg. This was scary. Haha. Very good story! I can't think of anything that needs to be changed or improved, because its already pretty darn good. The beginning of the ...

The wind seperates a seed and its flower, Lifting the seed with all its mighty power. I dunno, I don't really like this last sentence. "Mighty power" just really doesn't ...

There is a girl who is always great Her face always has a smile Her hair always look gorgeous She also has the cutest styles Everyone abselutely absolutely loves her ...

PLEASE READ THE PROLOGUE! OR YOU WILL NOT GET THE FIRST CHAPTER!!! Why don't you put in a link to the prologue? Some people are pretty lazy and wbf going ...

I really, really like this. In fact, it's probably the most enjoyable and interesting thing I've read on YWS. Honestly. I especially love how you've described Golden Boy, and you've ...