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Hey Steam! I loved aesthetically the font you used for this poem. Much of what I said in my previous review is also going to apply to this poem, there ...

Hey Steam! I like the concept of the piece and the forest fire imagery relating to the spreading of rumors, it is an apt metaphor. I think the poem can ...

Beautiful. There is an experience that is like a blockbuster teaser trailer of summer images just kind of flashing by line after line, I get this through the strung-along fragments ...

Hey Gravity, There's keen observances of feeling here and for that I think many who read this will find it relatable. There are two main ideas expressed [1.) isolation which ...

Aleta! Ooo, I really like the suggested depths in this poem, the ideas explored, particularly the emotions that the speaker goes through. First stanza is a bit of a mouthful. ...

There are 2 mentions of the word galaxy, 3 mentions of star(ry), 1 mention of universe. So basically stars and space and stars in this poem. I don't think the ...

Ame, Your avvie is kind of mesmerizing :P Anyway. There's definitely something powerful in the title, something that reverberates, perhaps because it evokes reverence itself. The "I" in the poem ...

Lums, Utterly memorizing, that tug and pull of the mystery against the vulnerability. I love the image of this fallen trajectory as a sort of specimen for us to label, ...

I sympathize with your speaker :) Maybe not Marlon Brando but he tries so hard, and I think that is what endears me to the piece—a narrator character fumbling with ...

Casa! I am slow-going, I know

Casa, If you start your line with "can't" then, "cease" should be "ceases" in your second line to keep everything present-tense. Man. I guess that messes up your syllable-count, huh? ...

TheStormAroundMe, I am not a fan of that title. I understand a play of those "in" sounds over and over and how that can be fun and tempting! But for ...

Marm, Part of the fun of poetry is reinvention and you do this so well with reinventing your lines and and your form and breath patterns, but I might suggest ...

Hey Gravs! The "It" in the beginning adds intrigue and mystery and we start with that mystery of wanting to know what "it" is that steals the narrator's words, breaths, ...

Stells! It's such a pleasure to read your poems. Your form and your breaks allows for a slow, meditated kind of reading that suits this contemplative narrator. What brings me ...