Audy

Hey Wonder, I'm just going to whizz on by and dive right into this! Almost immediately upon reading it, there's a good sense of flow/rhyme. The A/B pattern was done ...

Hey Arif, Be sure to click on the edit button to the right of your post and try to fix the formatting so that you can break this apart by ...

Yoda, any poem with superman is awesome 8) And also points out how the comic creators made all those alliterative character names /# WE'RE ONTO THEM I'm a sucker for ...

Deanie! This poem is really cool, I think I've said that already during workshop x) I think it expresses a lot of interesting ideas & concepts, and there's a strong ...

Hey Density, I enjoyed this poem. It's a tired concept, to be sure -- the whole deal of love gone corrupt/ unfaithfulness, or unhappy partners, but on the other hand, ...

crumb's crumb... lololololol! Very nice, Rage. I love the progression from beginning to end, you have control over your lines, which is good to see. It never felt like you ...

Hey Rishab I love political poems and politically slanted poems, however I felt this could use a bit of work. It sort of glosses over a lot of different political ...

Hey Magpie! Was it intentional to have your first stanza as abac, and your second and third stanzas as defe? OR, is it the difference in our accents that abate/heat ...

Hey Josec, It's Audy here to review your poem, though I'll be honest, I didn't think this was intended to be a prose poem, was it? I'm going to assume ...

Hey Giselle! I think you have a cute poem here and I like the progression to the end when we realize the whole thing is talking about a cake :) ...

Hey PinkPanther! This is an interesting concept, I like how you use the heat as the enemy here, almost thought the "hot fingers" alluded to some sort of abuser, but ...

Hey Deanie! I agree that the ending to this piece is somewhat rough, I think about three stanzas from the end the pace really slows down and the poem is ...

Hey Niteowl! Ah, this is just such a delight and beautiful piece to read. Beautiful in its conciseness and precision, but also in its form. I love how your main ...

Hey Melanwen! I love the concept of this poem and I thought it had an interesting progression, I did not expect it to end with the speaker to their knees ...

Hey Animal! I think the concept of this poem is cute and I definitely see that you've gotten a lot better in terms of rhyme and rhythm, your concepts are ...