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Silverfox, This poem speaks to me as one of intense hurt, a betrayal. Envy for what was not had and a realization of a golden past of dreams and ambition. ...

Speakerskat! This poem is about Dean! But it doesn't really seem sincere or authentic. By that I mean, I know nothing about the person the poem is about, and if ...

i. Pers, I like how you say "still too" far away, like, scrunching together all these quantifying words in one breath makes for this rich first line packed with meaning ...

I enjoyed this poem, Luums! The way it sort of sets up this whisper-toned world which works well with the form, it also lends itself really well to re-reading and ...

DoubleOJell0, I expect to read more jelly poems from you, might I suggest a haiku? This piece was pretty jelly, I must admit. And funny in a smelly kind of ...

Pomp! It's been ages, right? I loved this. When I read it, I felt this desire and urge to write again, like a jolt of inspiration. I can take my ...

Hello Acm, I love progression poems and I love the play on repetition, even saying so, I'm not too fond of the last line. Too predicable. I understand how it's ...

Pomp! This is very cool, it's very meta. Almost the way that a director or playwright would form a world where they talk about stageright, it was raining, stageleft, here ...

Spark! So I could read this entire poem without the parantheticals and still retain all of the poem's meaning. I think that form-wise, the stuff in paranthesis do look pretty, ...

Clippedwings! Your podium/valedictorian rhyme? Brilliant. I also enjoyed some of the subtler ones, like the seen/fifteen and the time/tie. I love how you played with it instead of imposing a ...

Hey AndrewRayne, The poem seems lofty to me. Even the title is in itself a kind of paradox, and while, it's not incomprehensible, it reads almost too dense to enjoy. ...

Hey Sharoze, I don't normally like rhyming poetry, but your rhymes are so softly and carefully laid that I didn't mind them. I also don't normally like when writers center ...

15253! There are some grammar issues in the poem, the " there their " minds gone dry and lack of apostrophes throughout the piece. In the very first line, it ...

ooo Savvy, I love this. I think starting with the pink fingertips was an apt choice for this poem. I've been told by many teachers that the way to get ...