Asma

Hi, Asma here! i'll be reviewing your 'beautiful' Short and sweet story today! So to begin with, usually short stories run so fast that you cant understand the emotions very ...

Hey! I am Asma and i will be submitting a review for your poem today... So, to start with- you had some punctuation mistakes (again) and as i mentioned before ...

hey! Asma here as always i'll be reviewing this chapter today... Okay, so it was quite impressive but again those punctuation and spelling mistakes which you will correct after reading ...

i like it love it,,blah blah blah you might be fed up of hearing it right?? especially when i already "praised" it face to face... Anyways, rhyming is good..,but you ...

Hey! So it's me- Asma and i would like to review your poem today as it was really good piece of work. So to start off with, i liked the ...

Hey! I am Asma and i'll be reviewing your amazing poem today! :D So First of all, i loved your concept- the way the hero dies on an unimportant day...that's ...

Hey! I am Asma and i will be submitting a review on this poem, as i really liked it. So first off, the relation you showed between the wind and ...

i loved your poem so just wanted to give a review... :) It was amazing, and i've been looking for this type of deep poem for such a long time ...

Great! I love it, and not because it was about me and E-C or whatever you call him...but i tried singing it and it was not bad.... :P i mean ...

Its good and my review is above! I liked your story and just wanted to give a small review on it. :) Okay, my friends covered almost everything up there...but ...

WOW! The poem was heart touching....i really could understand the meaning in every word. It was a good topic to write about, i really liked the way you wrote it. ...

OMG!!!! i looooooved it and believe me can't wait for the next chapter. And really like Frank's character, really intresting. And your way of describing was also quite good. Frankly ...

Hey! a small review here- i loved the way of writing but a bit too fast. You might have noticed how writers usually describe each character, place and situation with ...