Asith

Hello! I liked this story, and I adore the concept. To preface this review, I'm going to say that I'm very partial to this genre of short story/flash fiction, and ...

Hello! Happy review day from the Ruby Reviewers! I'm just here to leave a very short review, basically saying that I enjoyed this bit! Your writing is well-developed in terms ...

Hello! Happy review day from the Ruby Reviewers :) This was a pretty fun read; it came across as really sweet telling of innocent, young love. Heck, I've been there, ...

Hello! Happy review day from the Ruby Reviewers :) You know, when I clicked on this, I wasn't expecting it to be so short. That being said, I do enjoy ...

Hello! Happy review day from the Ruby Reviewers :) I really really enjoyed this story; it's one of the more well-written pieces I've read today. I'm going to focus on ...

Hello, and happy review day! I like the idea you have here -- it makes for a very interesting narrative. That being said, I'm here to critique your writing, so ...

Hello and happy review day! While I like the concept of the story, and your narrative voice in general, here's some criticism: 1) Probably the biggest issue in your writing, ...

Hello! I have a feeling I'm going to be enjoying your works a fair bit; it's essentially my favourite genre after all. Of course, that may make me kind of ...

Hello! Just going to leave a quick review here :) For starters, you really should use paragraphs in your work! They split your story into nest little segments and make ...

Hello, and welcome to the site! You've prompted my first review in about two months haha I've been reading your stuff recently, and I wanted to review this one since ...

I love the imagery in this piece! The use of present tense was a bit awkward at first, but it grew on me. I honestly wasn't planning on reviewing today, ...

Hello! It's a shame this hasn't been reviewed yet, people are honestly missing out. I personally loved the story -- I love how raw and genuine it feels; as if ...

Hello again! It took me a while to get here, but I knew I'd review it eventually :P Now, since this is the second part, I think it's worth revisiting ...

Hello again. I figured I might as well review this third part as well, so we have a cohesive list of my thoughts on each chapter. I really do hope ...

Hello! Welcome to the site, and thanks for posting! I adore the creativity of your story; it's been a while since I've read a story so absolutely and inherently imaginative! ...