AsTheFlowersGrow

Oh my god I love this poem. I love your phrasing. I love your stanzas. I love your words. This is so well written. Great job. I just recently went ...

Hello. This is a nice poem. Good job! I want to let you know that I do not really know much about writing poetry, but I will review as a ...

Hello. First thing that I want to say is that this is all just my opinion as a reader and that you can ignore everything I am writing if you ...

This is a very cute poem and I like it a lot. I can relate to this easily. I'm not sure how I feel about the stanza phrasing. At first ...

Hey. This is a really good poem. I have read a lot of poems in my life that are bad with spacing or sentence structure and I think you do ...

I like this poem a lot! Good job. It is short and sweet! I'm not sure I understand why some of it is italicized but I like the wording. Along ...

Hello. Nice poem. I love the parallelism and repetition used in this. It is very effective. There weren't that many things that I found that I didn't care for. The ...

You said be specific, so I will. I think this song is amazing. For an 11 year old, I don't understand. Your sister has some real talent and you can ...

I think this is a great song because of the message. I also think that the grammatical errors are taking away from that. Another point is that the lines aren't ...

This poem is pretty good! I, first off, do not understand, "The stone revealed my underneath naked skin." It doesn't flow or make much sense. I think a big thing ...

I'm not sure what you are struggling with, but I do enjoy how this is open to interpretation. This could not only be a struggle with family, but it could ...

I like this poem a lot. The story repeating the beginning is one of my favorite things to read. The imagery is really good and I think this is very ...

I think that this is really good. You seem to be really good at poetry. On one side though, I think that it was right to put nonsense in this. ...

Nice poem! At first, Morrigan, I thought that it was going to be a silly poem, but then when reading it, I realized that it was just the opposite. The ...

Hello! Great poem speakerskat! This poem is beautiful. The meaning is great. I think the imagery with the little girl is great too. You did a great job. I think ...