Arouet

Hey there Lefty. I'll start off writing this intro and then add my critique, I'll be give my opinion on it all the way at the end. Also, I tend ...

Hey there! Read the prologue as I felt it might have been important and boy was I right! The prologue was a good read and this seems to be the ...

Hey there! So, this is a very gripping prologue, at least in the first few paragraphs. I feel like it slowly became a little dull halfway though. Perhaps adding a ...

Whoa, you have some amazing dreams. I don't know if you consider these nightmares but whenever I have a dream like these, I wake up excited. Maybe that's just me. ...

Hey there, turtles... or dolphin? I'm Arouet and welcome to YWS! I would like to mention that this story has quite a number of flaws in it, but this really ...

Hey there! I will be reviewing your work as objectively as I can. My critique: -"I called at home informing about the windy atmosphere" The sentence is a little off, ...

Hey there! Just finished your depression Poem(?) and I have a lot to say, but definitely not in the comment section. If you want to talk then you're gonna have ...

Hey there again! Decided to do this one out of convenience since I did the last one as well. Just keep in mind that I haven't been following the storyline ...

Hey there! I didn't read your previous works so I'll try to be as objective as possible. My critique: -“No,” Riley had said" Should be a full stop in the ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing as straightforward and just as I can. Critique: -"you are frightened, you are frightened, you are so so so afraid" The repetition here, as much ...

Well written statement, you can only agree after reading and even possibly take initiative yourself. The stories written are each unique and help bring out the desperation of the message ...

Hey there! Arouet reporting for duty! I will try to be as straight and just as possible for your sake. First of all you should know that I don't read ...

Hey there! I would first like to say that I'm not much of a poetry person and that a few things confused me in this particular poem. So, I'm gonna ...

Hey there! I'm Arouet and I'm here to review your poem as just as I can. firstly, wow, very well written poem. I can see the amount of experience you ...

Hey there! First of all, I would like to say "Woah". And I don't mean 'wow'. I say that because a poem like this takes courage, but also requires hate ...