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Re: I pulled my heart out from my chest and placed it in a box
Hello! I thought I would taunt our competitors by earning points for our team from their works. Happy Review Day! :D First of all, that title. Come on, you can ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Grown up
Hello. I saw you wanted this piece reviewed on our review team form. So, here I am! :D First of all, the fourth line "we should go back" is not ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Clockwork
I thought I would torture my competitors by earning point for my team from their works. So, here I am. :) I love the idea you have here. Its a ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Meteor Powers
First of all, let me say that the line " And my mind went to imagining a T-rex with it’s arms kept by its face where it fell over and ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Tired
Hello. I'm Ari and I chose to review your work today because I am going through a similar situation. First, let me tell you that I love you, Jesus loves ...
Sep 8, 2018 -
Re: The Staircase
Is this one of your works that you talked about with Kev? It came out awesome. I read this as a journey through morality in the eyes of a human. ...
Sep 3, 2018 -
Re: The Black Night
I feel like there was some symbolism here. Are you trying to say not to be afraid of a seemingly sad and lonely place and if you do it will ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Losing my green
Happy Review Day!!! It's me, Ari (hey that rhymes) and imma review your goods. This poem reminded me of Rupi Kaur. Check her out when you get the chance. Also, ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Yet I continued to live
What a beautiful way to describe the strength of your friend. Your writing is amazing and nearly flawless. However, let me point out the flaws, friend. Don't start every new ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Rain
This is a beautiful poem! However, based on the description, I thought this poem would just be about rain! I love the comparison between two people and fog. You are ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: life's inertia Bowl
HAPPY REVIEW DAY HOOZ-BAWND!!! I have come back to this work to write a proper review. Once again, my brain literally crashed from all the thinking this made me do. ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: A Word about Emotions . . .
Hi! Happy Review Day! My name is Ari and I am here to review this work of yours. First thing I want to say is how much I can agree ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Would you be Vexed? Shakespearean Sonnet: 14 lines of iambic pentameter.
Hi Radrook! You already know me so I'm not gonna introduce myself. Happy Review Day! :D The rhyming in the line "Why must you be perplexed at my reaction? Would ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: The Rainbow
(I had to review one of your poems. You are one of my favorite writers on here.) Hi! Happy Review Day! My name is Ari and I will be reviewing ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: I Don't Need You
Hello! Happy Review day! My name is Ari and I am going to review your script today! (Obviously) The first thing I want to say is this; Don't you think ...
Apr 29, 2018
