Hello and before I get to far along I was totally sure that this was about the roman gods until the lovely word cat came in and then I was blown away. (just saying)
I wanted to start off with your subject is a bit out there for cats, let alone what im gonna guess is wild cats. But other than the heavy subject I do really like your style of the script, but something you have to do with scripts is that you have to kind of give them a lead in as well as a setting.
I did note your note at the beginning but, even in animated movies there is always at least a scene setter note so that the situation makes a bit of sense to the readers. I'm curious and do wonder where these cats are. Are they in an alley way or the forest in a grove, or along the seashore in a sandy cove? It could be anywhere and it just makes me curious. Other than that I enjoyed this a bunch, wonderful work and keep writing.
~Danceingtreeelf
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