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AriannaC

AriannaC/Minchpunk

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: I pulled my heart out from my chest and placed it in a box

    Hello! I thought I would taunt our competitors by earning points for our team from their works. Happy Review Day! :D First of all, that title. Come on, you can ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Grown up

    Hello. I saw you wanted this piece reviewed on our review team form. So, here I am! :D First of all, the fourth line "we should go back" is not ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Clockwork

    I thought I would torture my competitors by earning point for my team from their works. So, here I am. :) I love the idea you have here. Its a ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Meteor Powers

    First of all, let me say that the line " And my mind went to imagining a T-rex with it’s arms kept by its face where it fell over and ...

    Sep 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Tired

    Hello. I'm Ari and I chose to review your work today because I am going through a similar situation. First, let me tell you that I love you, Jesus loves ...

    Sep 8, 2018
  • Poetry » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: The Staircase

    Is this one of your works that you talked about with Kev? It came out awesome. I read this as a journey through morality in the eyes of a human. ...

    Sep 3, 2018
  • Script » General, General Re: The Black Night

    I feel like there was some symbolism here. Are you trying to say not to be afraid of a seemingly sad and lonely place and if you do it will ...

    Aug 26, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Losing my green

    Happy Review Day!!! It's me, Ari (hey that rhymes) and imma review your goods. This poem reminded me of Rupi Kaur. Check her out when you get the chance. Also, ...

    Aug 26, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Yet I continued to live

    What a beautiful way to describe the strength of your friend. Your writing is amazing and nearly flawless. However, let me point out the flaws, friend. Don't start every new ...

    Aug 26, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Rain

    This is a beautiful poem! However, based on the description, I thought this poem would just be about rain! I love the comparison between two people and fog. You are ...

    Jul 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Supernatural Re: life's inertia Bowl

    HAPPY REVIEW DAY HOOZ-BAWND!!! I have come back to this work to write a proper review. Once again, my brain literally crashed from all the thinking this made me do. ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: A Word about Emotions . . .

    Hi! Happy Review Day! My name is Ari and I am here to review this work of yours. First thing I want to say is how much I can agree ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Would you be Vexed? Shakespearean Sonnet: 14 lines of iambic pentameter.

    Hi Radrook! You already know me so I'm not gonna introduce myself. Happy Review Day! :D The rhyming in the line "Why must you be perplexed at my reaction? Would ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Rainbow

    (I had to review one of your poems. You are one of my favorite writers on here.) Hi! Happy Review Day! My name is Ari and I will be reviewing ...

    Apr 29, 2018
  • Script » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: I Don't Need You

    Hello! Happy Review day! My name is Ari and I am going to review your script today! (Obviously) The first thing I want to say is this; Don't you think ...

    Apr 29, 2018


You're given the form, but you have to write the sonnet yourself. What you say is completely up to you.
— Madeleine L'Engle, A Wrinkle in Time