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  • Poetry » Humor, Humor
    Re: Books

    Coming across this poem was very nice. I also found it rather funny considering I love hoarding books. I don't even do it on purpose. (most of the time anyway) ...

    May 24, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 43

    I haven't read any of the other chapters, but I love the story. It was fairly easy to walk in on this chapter to. I didn't really notice anything wrong ...

    May 24, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor
    Re: Project Oblivious - Ch 4

    Nice chapter! I just want to congratulate you on how nice your grammar is. I found nothing wrong with it. Even though I read the chapter out of context I ...

    Jun 23, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: Taste of evil

    I was scrolling through the Green Room and your title immediately caught my attention. Time is precious, I am but a wilted flower darkness is my only companion as I ...

    Jun 23, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction
    Re: The Augury of RiverClan - Chapter 10

    Okay, so I was able to drop right into the middle of this conversation only because I have already read the first Warrior Cat Series, which is what this is ...

    Jun 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: You've got no Brains

    So I'm very tech-oriented and am still not sure if I would like to memorize all the technicalities. (though I probably could if I wanted to) That being said everybody ...

    Jun 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: The Night Sky

    My very first thought about this poem was that it completely exceeded my expectations. It was very fluid. When it rhymed it rhymed nicely and when it didn't it blended ...

    Jun 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: Who Do I cry for?

    I absolutely loved this poem! It's full of emotion and it rhymes. I absolutely love rhyming poetry. First of all, I don't think there are any flaws with this poem. ...

    Jun 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: wannabe canada

    Good poem overall it really illustrates your point. I just have a few nitpicky things to point out that will help the overall clarity of your poem. #1 fish swim ...

    Jun 21, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: you aren't the one i'm mourning

    This is a very touching and well-written poem. I can almost see myself burying something but I'm not sure what. and every moment I've loved matter, I'm not sure what ...

    Jun 21, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: a series of unfortunate events.

    Great rhymes! A good poem overall. It says what we all think from time to time. I've never really thought about what the title of my life would be, you've ...

    Jun 19, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction
    Re: Fateful, are the times; The journey of Lucas Manroe pt1

    ArctiWolf here for a review! I really enjoyed your story, I was pleasantly surprised to find it was fantasy. Your concepts are amazing. They are, unfortunately, hidden behind some bad ...

    Jun 19, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Chapter 1 - The Prophecy

    Loved the chapter. Keep it up! Now onto the review! Quick little note, (I don't know if there is really enough here for a review) I just noticed you seemed ...

    Jun 17, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Argument

    Heads up! I'm a sucker for this kind of fiction. Let's just say I have plans to start from the beginning sometime. Anyway on to the review. I didn't really ...

    Jun 17, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Meet Saloni

    I'll warn you ahead of time that this will be a lengthy review. This is not meant to hurt your feelings in any way shape or form. #1 Today Saloni ...

    Jun 17, 2021


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