Archer

You have a very distinctive style of writing, which is a great thing. I started reading this thinking to myself that this serial sounded very familiar, and then I remembered ...

I'm guessing this is an essay for school? It's a good short essay, but I would've liked to hear more about his work and the techniques he uses. You do ...

Hi Blackwood! I don't know if I've ever read something that long before that's written in only the second person perspective. It made it a lot more interesting to read, ...

If you're going to be mocking the reviews of others, you should probably make sure your own are at least above the standard you're claiming to uphold. This article struck ...

Since this is a spoiler, I'm guessing this is supposed to be like the back cover of a book. That is, you're trying to rope the reader in with an ...

Hi EmmVeePi! There are a few lines in here that I really like. Two lines in particular that caught my eye were: You were the one that got away, Still ...

Just as a suggestion, you may want to change the genre categories from "General / General" to something like "Non-fiction / Spiritual." I'm guessing there are a lot of people ...

The poem actually sounds rather nice. The flow is good, and none of the rhyming seemed all that forced except for "here" and "hears." I also really like the interruption ...

Very melancholy! Unfortunately, I think a lot of people can relate to this. I like the repetition of "time and time again." It serves as a good vehicle to reinforce ...

Interesting poem. I'll get to the poem itself in a moment, but a few things caught my eye first: one that i'll never forget. The capitalized 'I' could be intentional ...

I like this. The repetition of "paper cranes" could get grating, but I think you make it work fine. I also particularly like the steady progression within the poem. In ...

Not exactly the biggest fan of Taylor Swift myself, but I do enjoy mash-ups (mixing together a song and a story)! However, I think you should probably leave a quick ...

Your writing style is quite polished! I thought the dialogue was well done, and I really like how Liam has such a distinctive way of talking. I also especially like ...

So I really like how your avatar complements this piece! It's an interesting poem, but it lacks emotion. Reading what you posted in response to another reviewer, I think what ...

I'll be upfront and say that I have never read a sestina that I like! The structure just seems so arbitrary and it sounds so forced that I can never ...