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Re: My History Book
Hey TarunRamKanuri! I see you've brought in aspects which discuss politics and society in this poem - as you've mentioned for your work's tag. I'm assuming that you're discussing the ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: Life
Hey artybirdy! Yes, I'll take your note into consideration because a writer needs to be clear with his thoughts while writing. I can sort of see for myself that this ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Pain
Hey artybirdy! A very interesting piece of poetry this is. Firstly you've been consistent in discussing the subject of pain. You successfully conclude with a strong message about pain and ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: My Dear
Hey DivergentDemigod! Great piece of poetry. I see elements of romance, relationships, and friendship/family coming into this too. Content wise, I am able to quickly grasp how you describe your ...
Jul 16, 2016 -
Re: You
Hey Casanova! What an interesting piece this is. You've dealt with subjects of family, friends, and love too. Content wise, I see you discussing issues such as rejection and so ...
Jul 13, 2016 -
Re: The War Against Humanity.
Hey DivergentDemigod! This is poetry of exceptional quality. I mean it, because to me it seems as if you've taken up a subject with contemporary values - the content sort ...
Jul 5, 2016 -
Re: Impossible You
Hey herbgirl! This is a very romantic piece of poetry. Romantic in the sense that you can target someone or even something you love. Content wise, It's clear how you ...
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Re: Me without you...
Hey Eros! This is an interesting piece of poetry as your concepts are fixed on how the world isn't the same without a special someone or something. Content wise, your ...
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Re: The Dark
Hey stevebayor! This is a very interesting piece of yours. You've mention themes such as horror and mystery coming into this. This helped me understand the content a bit more. ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Redemption
Hey stevebayor! This is very deep and thoughtful piece of poetry you've presented here. You've taken expression of heart-broken, and romantics to a whole new level. I say this because ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: condolences
Hey Elysium! Though this was short piece, I felt it was a bold attempt by you to convey such a valuable profound truth in less descriptions. Content wise, you're on ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Bruised
Hey GrapeNerd! This is a very deep and sort of harsh content presented. Apart from love bringing joy, you've presented how love can equally bring pain. Content wise, it's clear ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Dreams
Hey NerdTrash6000! This is quite interesting as you've incorporated rhyming couplets into your poem, which unlike other poems here on YWS is quite significant. The content is quite simple, yet ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Time and Wait
Hey KittyMew! This is quite interesting, as your content seems clear about romance and rejoice. At times things get confusing, but I will mention them all. Content wise, it's clear ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: sensitivity to light
Hey Morrigan! This is a poem of harsh and deep meaning. I appreciate you for taking up such a powerful subject to discuss about, as it contains multiple messages and ...
Jun 26, 2016
