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Hi cm! I went through your poem and thought of reviewing it since I'd wish to make certain suggestions. It was a good read, though I'll say you could have ...

Hello Lex! I see this is your first poem over here so I don't want to sound to critical in my review. I liked your poem. Your desire and hopes ...

Hi Ben! Your poem, according to me, was quite expressive. What I felt was missing in it was the use of at least a few metaphors. There's absolutely no hard ...

Hey cm! I'm not that good at reviewing horror poetry, yet I sort of found this interesting. Your descriptiveness was great. It almost gave me goosebumps! :-P Towards the end ...

Hey Angel! I don't really know why I chose your poem to review out of all others. Maybe because I could somehow relate to it in some ways. :-) I ...

Hey Kado! Your poem is touching and pretty in its subtle grief. I loved the comparison with the Bee. It gave a 'smile' to the poem, if you get what ...

Hey Rose! :-) It's quite a thought-provoking poem you have here. It has got a deep insight and well-considered judgement of human life. Though you have brought into light some ...

OH MY GOD! I want more of that! :smt003 Really! Loved the plot! And it was written in a very interesting way. There were some grammatical and spelling errors which ...

I think that was good! :-) The poem had a kind of melody, a sad one. I especially loved how you repeated those kind of created a link between the ...

I think that was some poetry! :-) It was strong and loud, and had the capacity to capture the reader. And even though I found it a bit choppy, the ...

I liked that, yes. :) Just one thing I'd mention, it could have been a bit more 'poetic', if you get what I mean. The meaning and the feeling in ...

Well, usually I'm a bit critical of poems that don't rhyme but, somehow, this one was different. ;-) I specially liked he question-answer style. I especially loved this part- Souls ...

Like, like, like a lot! The idea was superb! And the comparison with painting was even better. It's amazing how such great ideas can flow from your pen. You're definitely ...

Nice one. I liked it more because, unlike some other poem, this one has a message to give. You can learn from it. That's what is needed for a good ...

Nice one except that your 'there's should be 'their's and 'breath's should be 'breathe's. Hope you got me. :-D The drama in the poem, the climax was well-described. How a ...