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Re: The Last Bite Knows My Name
Hello fellow poet, I have to say, I'm such a fan of this— the imagery, the abstractness, the rhythm, the flow, the way you formed the words, I am obsessed. ...
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Re: My dearest Who..?
Hello again! This particular work reminds of specifically of Olivia Rodrigo's songs (just so you know, I like her songs and mean well), especially the heartbreaking ones. This seems like ...
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Re: A School Crush Paradox..
Hello again! As you know I'm already quite a fan of your work and this too didn't disappoint me ^^ The poem starts with the feeling of not wanting to ...
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Re: A Sky Full of Stars
Hello! Your poem has bewitched me, what I mean is, it's beautiful! "In a sky full of stars, shining in the midnight, I choose you. You are my star that ...
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Re: bzzzzzzzzbzzzzzzzbzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Re: I Miss The Day
Haven't posted a review in a while but this one was just calling me because of how much it stood out from other poems really. First of all, gravely relatable, ...
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Re: The Funeral
Seems like the funeral is from the dead person's point of view, interesting to say the least. From what I am seeing, the poem is written into parts, the beginning ...
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Re: I Awake in Slumberland
Hellow fellow poet! First of all, love the username, second of all, beautiful imagery! Honestly reading this was a treat in itself, the way you craft those words is honestly ...
Apr 21 -
Re: the final act
Hello! I'm not much of an expert here when it comes to poetry or writing in general but personally I love the continuity of the rhythm and the overall message ...
Apr 20 -
Re: Why do you exist?
Yayyy new poemssss!!! Okay honestly I really like the self explanatory-but-profound thing that you have goin on in here!! Don't really have much to review here honestly because it's great ...
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Re: Wildflowers?
Love your work Nataleen with three Es! It's a pretty self explanatory but profound piece on love and loss I see. Love the allusion of Yung Kai's wildflowers, it indeed ...
Apr 13 -
Re: Acceptance.
Love the simplistic flow and explanation of being in delusion and in love. It's short but beautiful, perhaps devastating too. But this feeling of delusion too shall pass with the ...
Apr 11 -
Re: Grade 5.
Hi Nataleen! You've written a truly heartbreaking piece on love, loss and friendship— something most of us have experienced once in our lives. The first part of the poem seems ...
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Re: dear moon..
Seems like the speaker is seeking comfort under something that has always lived in the shadows of someone superior to them. I love the way it's written somewhat like a ...
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Re: oxygen therapy
This reminded me of something I wrote a while back, if you would like to read: The weather is cold but love is colder. They say it burns, leaves you ...
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