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Re: When Pink Turns Blue
Hello, Anne here. This is a beautiful poem, I am mystified, in the best kind of way. I would like to start this review by saying that I am sorry ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: Mars: acrostics
This is super good. I love your structure and form. I think my favorite part was your alliteration of "meteor-mangled. I also enjoy how you describe the planet as a ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: That Which Was Long Ago
Hello, Anne here... I really enjoyed the style of your poem. It was suspenseful and kept my attention throughout the whole thing. It is a shame that you do not ...
Sep 20, 2018 -
Re: From Dusk To Dawn
Hello, Anne here to leave you a review. I always love reviewing works like this, because they are so beautifully written. By the end of this poem, I felt like ...
Sep 17, 2018 -
Re: poem #5
Hello, You have a very interesting form of writing, one that I do not see on here a lot. that being said, i would take the time to give this ...
Sep 15, 2018 -
Re: Forevermore
Hello!!!! This was a very interesting work, not what I expected when I read your title. First off issssssss...grammar! I did notice a few small mistakes, in your first stanza, ...
Sep 15, 2018 -
Re: Mystery Girl
Wow, this was beautiful. I really enjoy poems in this style, they show that less truly is more. I like how you developed a sense of curiosity. Why silence? What ...
Sep 14, 2018 -
Re: Mars: acrostics
This is super good. I love your structure and form. I think my favorite part was your alliteration of "meteor-mangled. I also enjoy how you describe the planet as a ...
Dec 4, 2017 -
Re: Death and the Hypochondriac
Good morning! I like this short story very much. I am sure that you had fun writing it and developing your words. i do have a few suggestions though. You ...
Dec 1, 2017 -
Re: We'll Be Fine.
Hello! I really enjoyed reading this piece of poetry. It was very descriptive and I could clearly understand your situation based off of the words that were given to me. ...
Dec 1, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1 (coment name suggestions for the book please)
Hey man, This seems to be a pretty good story so far. I think that it is really cool that the characters can communicate without using verbal language. I know ...
Mar 24, 2017 -
Re: Frost Lark News 3/19/98
It is so neat to see you typing things up like this. I feel like it is nice to put sources such as this one on the web for others ...
Mar 24, 2017 -
Re: War—Why, When and How?
Anniepoo103 here for a short review. Wow this poem is really deep. I feel like it is so true. All of the government officials and people in suits who think ...
Jan 23, 2017 -
Re: literary love
Alrighty, short poem, short review. I really admire that you took the advise given to you. If I were you, I would go through and make all of the letter ...
Jan 23, 2017 -
Re: My Profile Picture
Hey NightKaizer. I really love your artwork. I checked out your profile and it looks like you are relatively new to the website. So, I welcome you. I really like ...
Jan 20, 2017
