Anma

Hello! Hmmmmm, that's a hard one but I would most likely think it would be a poem. It seems more poem then short story specially because of the emotion from ...

Hello @hyacinths! This a great short story ( my favorite work so far of yours) Lol :) The tittle really pulled my attention so one thing I can suggest is ...

Hello @269609 This is amazing! I can't really say anything bad about this its just all good. One thing I may suggest though is don't use to many comas. Using ...

Hello Nathaniel! Anma here for a review! This is a nice piece, short, but nice. There is some imagery in this which I like fairly much. The way you explained ...

Hello Kostia! A great day for a review right? :) I love this, its not exactly what i expected but its still great! I feel you have a real advantage ...

Hello Morgan! I love this peace of work! I hope that you'll keep writing it! Its soooooo interesting and cool, i can tell you that for sure! It caught my ...

A crapy poem? I don't think so Bellarke All your poems are amazing! Just had to put that out there, Lol Anyway,,, Lets get started I love this, its not ...

Hello Kostia I love what you have here, its very interesting and out there. There is a few small mistakes that need to be fixed but none that will really ...

Hey Jade! my long lost sister, lol Omg!I love it! I fell in love with this story from the time i read chapter one. I knew it was going to ...

Hello Fantasci! This is a wonderful poem! I love what you did it based on, the message and feelings toward it is noticeable. It has a story line to it ...

Hey Jade! This is very creative, the meaning and words themselves go well. I did have trouble reading it a little though. Probably cause i didn't expect it, lol. Anyway........ ...

Hello Terian! This is a really good peace. There is just a few things you may want to consider changing/fixing. The words them self are great and I'm happy of ...

Hello Jade! Soo, lets go over this This is very interesting, creative. I can feel the emotions from the characters. There is a lot of punctuation issues..... and a few ...

Absolutely! I feel that if you can and want to make it then do it! It sounds interesting, id probably check it out myself. I love that it has romance, ...

Hello Lostar I shortened your user name, hope you don't mind. I can tell you took time to write this. There is emotion in it, i can tell. The words ...