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Re: Forgetful
Hello Avery! I hope you don't mind me shortning your user name... Lol, anyway.......................... This is great! I really like it! You were so realistic and I can totally compare ...
Apr 24, 2019 -
Re: A Wish
Hello Alicien! Hope you don't mind the nick-name. This is a pretty good poem! I really like it, it could be a great song as well. The words flow nicely ...
Apr 23, 2019 -
Re: Art Attempt from long ago
This is really good! Hello Savoy! Anma here for a review! This is really a good piece. Your really good at drawing, i can tell you that! There is a ...
Apr 21, 2019 -
Re: Us
Wow, this is so good! Hello Morrugin! Sorry if i spelt that wrong! I really like this drawing, its really good. I can tell you have a real talent at ...
Apr 21, 2019 -
Re: Here comes the sun: A Loki Romance
Hello @Blairwood! Anma here to review, and give you tips ;) Lol So first things first I want to point out what you could improve on in this story. The ...
Apr 20, 2019 -
Re: Eyes
Wow, this is really creative... Hello Noel! Anma here for a review! So before i get started i just want to say i cant help with the eyes problem, lol. ...
Apr 19, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 5.2
Hello Honora! Wow, wow, wow, I'm like totally into this now! Its so good, and I'm gonna guess the vampire did that huh? But if so why????? So many questions ...
Apr 18, 2019 -
Re: "Amphetamines" - a rap
Hello 4evergreen! Sorry i keep calling you that btw...... Anyway... I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a really good rap! I do think it would be better if sung, but hey.............. ...
Apr 18, 2019 -
Re: A weird story is a good story
Hello @OofOof1! This is really a fun short story! I loved it so much ( and i got to say I'm glad were doing this for the competition) It's not ...
Apr 17, 2019 -
Re: Out Into The City (Chapter 2)
Another chapter? That was fast! Hello Briely! This is really good, i honestly love what your writing about. I feel this is going to be a very adventurous book! (If ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: Out Into The City (Chapter 1)
Hello Briely! This is a really good chapter! Its a reat way to begin, and its very interesting. Here are some suggestions i have for you.. "She lived in a ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: Should we still pray?
Hello @4revgreen Wow, this is really good! I love the name you have for it, it really attracted me to read it. There are a few grammar errors but there ...
Apr 13, 2019 -
Re: Pain
That's sad... I hope your doing okay now! I do suggest that you should mostly say, why, how you feel this way. I mean you don't need to say anything ...
Apr 13, 2019 -
Re: Be Careful Who You Trust Chapter 5.1
Hello Honora! Omg! Love it!This is really good! I really love how you based it on real life. I do see some grammar and punctuation errors. Fix that and you'll ...
Apr 12, 2019 -
Re: The Boy and His Wolf:Chapter.2 The Encounter.
Hello Luna! This is really good chapter! I really like your writeing, you have a real talent. I do see some grammar and punctuation problems. There not that bad though, ...
Apr 12, 2019
