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Re: do you
Hello there Soundofmind! This is a amazing! The lyrics themselves are great! But singing them makes them sound ten times better! Its wonderful to hear and read. The only thing ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: A Million Times and A Trillion More
Hello Katnes! Anma here with a review! This peace is very artistic, and creative! Its lovely, even now i feel its very long but i don't think that is really ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: Love is..
Hello Gigi! Is that okay if i shorten your name that way?? Soooo... I love it! The lyrics flow well, and the verses are well put in as well. I ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: Problems
Hello Avery! This is a great piece, I have to say. I can feel the emotion coming from it. The message is very sting as well. I like that you ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: I'm Sorry
Hello PoTatOe! When I read this I could tell the emotions in it right away. It kind of reminds me of something you would put in a song to tell ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: (Thanos Can) Rewrite The Stars
Hello Ielu Its amazing! I love the expression to this poem! The topic, and emotion was great. It was an absolutely beautiful peace of art. There doesn't seem to be ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: Phantom
Hello! Its great! Its very interesting, its kind of creepy but it just makes it really good! I don't see many grammar or punctuation errors. It seems to be split ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: Captain Chapter III
Hey Star! Another chapter of Captain! I have to say i love this story your writing very much, its very interesting. I love how its changed around a bit from ...
Mar 15, 2019 -
Re: I'm fine
Hello Riley, is it okay if i call you that? Anyway......... This is a great poem, i love how your emotion changed in the middle were you said "I was ...
Mar 14, 2019 -
Re: The Untouchable
Hi OofOof! Amazing, Amazing that's all i can say. Its very beautiful and touching, its like a whistle that you never want to stop hearing. This is a very good ...
Mar 14, 2019 -
Re: Death
Hey Jade!! Its amazing! I'm not sure if it would be considered a poem though. Try to put some similes in it, maybe it will help. The words you used ...
Mar 14, 2019 -
Re: ST
Hey Jade! Your friend here with a review!! Wow, that was total shock, I didn't see that coming what so ever. Either than me being shocking, its amazing. Very interesting, ...
Mar 13, 2019 -
Re: You Broke Me
Hey Jade!! This is a wonderful poem! There's alot of emotion in it... it also has a very strong message as well There's no grammar mistakes that i can see. ...
Mar 11, 2019 -
Re: Cancer
Hello Bellarke Omg, first of all I'm so sorry to hear that. Second of all its wonderful, I almost cried reading it. I hope your okay, but the fact you ...
Mar 11, 2019 -
Re: Eagle Rock / Jay
Hello Elinor Its GREAT, i love the idea but there are a few things you probably should fix. There is a few parts were you cant tell who speaking. Also ...
Mar 10, 2019
