Young Writers Society

Hi! Manilla here for a review. (I listened to the song, and it's gorgeous!!) Let's get right into it, shall we?

I have zero nitpicks on the flow or word choice, partially because it's a lyrical piece and partially because it's just, well, well-written and good. One comment is that you placed rhymes in some places, but didn't in others, like the first two lines in the last stanza. I wonder why you did this. The middle stanza's lines are shorter compared to the others, and this could be personal thing, but would it fit better at the end?

I love the dreamy, ethereal vibe you produce, with words like "stars" and "happenstance". Please write more songs like this - The lyrics may be simple, but the music takes it to another level.

That's all from me!
-Manilla out

Hello soundofmind, FlamingPhoenix here with a review for you on this lovely day.

So let's get right to the review:

So everything in this song was just amazing. Everything just flowed so well together, it made me feel like is was in another world.
And the emotions that went through this song were really powerful, just giving it more meaning. So that's a job well done.
Over all I think your just an amazing writer. But I did see one thing, and If i'm wrong then I'm sorry.

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