AngusMacdonald

Creativityrules, Nice one! The poem was clearly heartfelt and genuine, and I like that in a poem. I do have a few minor quarrels, however. I thought at times the ...

BrokenSkye, A few issues I have to raise with this poem. First of all, punctuation can go a long way. At the moment, you have rare capitals at the beginning ...

Mirasol, Nice poem! I thought the rhyming scheme could be great at times, and you perfectly described a thunderstorm in my view. However, in every stanza, I found the last ...

GeeLyria Wow, way to make me sad. Great, amazing, fantastic poem, but really could you please make the next one not so sad ? haha, just kidding, it's really amazing. ...

Snickerdooly, That's great! Amazing poem, really really well written. The last stanza is just phenomenal, really. I love how you've invented this way of dealing with the pain of the ...

RWMcKinleys, I like it, I really do. You did well to express your emotions and your feelings in this piece. I felt that the story really flowed, and it was ...

I feel your pain, the beard has managed to evade me - but don't get too stressed, you've still got 16 days to turn into a werewolf-like-creature. To the poem ...

Talkingbird, Great work! I thought that was a very nice and impressive poem, well done. I thought the character of the stranger was described excellently, as they really don't seem ...

Wow! I literally felt your frustration just by reading that. Well done yet again, PollarBear! You always manage to come up with a very simple but effective poem, and I ...

Love it Pollar Bear, just wandering if you were drawing on personal experience? If you were, she/he needs to open their eyes and see the poet that's trying to talk ...

This poem is really lovely, and it's deinfaely worthy cause you are writing for. I realize it's quite hard when writing and acrostic poem to be consistent over all the ...

Polar Bear, I like it actually, I think you were quite hard on yourself in the description.. Not every poem has to solve world hunger! And I think this one ...

Hi Jessa ! I thought your poem was very sincere, and heartfelt. Yet at times, I did find the structure and rhyming format very confusing and inconsistent - and I ...

Hi bookworm, I like this poem, it's not too complex or difficult to understand, and flows quite well. You made your points very clear, and supported the issues of the ...

To think that that was your first poem is amazing! So before I analyse or talk about it any further I just want to say great job, and keep it ...