Angel17

I loved this line. It added a beat to the poem. Come creeping Quietly keeping The poem was very rhymic. Good work

it was a sweet short poem, i liked it :)

A great effect was added when you repeated the first stanza at the end. The poem created imagery, and the first stanza was quite strong.

nice poem. It followed a good rhythm

The last line isn't as strong as the other lines. But the poems itself was okay.

This poem makes the reader think

It's short and simple. i really like it. it is a really strong poem with really tense moments.

I love the poem, the imagery in the words you wrote were beautiful. You are very talented

Nice poem. Good imagery!!

The simile used is really unique. It is a sweet poem. very good!!

That was really sad. But i liked the poem!!

I didn't think that repitition was a problem in this poem. I think it helped create a dramatic effect aswell as the emotive language you used. I liked the poem ...

it is a lovely poem with powerful imagery. Excellent work!! :)

Your poem iz really gud!!

I really love it. Some really good lines. I like the way you mentioned the title a few times throughout the piece. Good work.