My first thought wasn't "emotional" but I suppose it does cover a variety of emotions... anger, hate, crying, anticipation... all found their way into your poem without making it overly complicated
I would have thought (punctuation):
Remember that night,
You carved your anger into your chest*?
And darling, I hated you for it,
But I hated myself more*.
...instead of running it all into one interrogative sentence.
I did like the two-line stanza in closing
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