Published October 31, 2005
Simple women should
Simply keep their
Bony knees drawn tightly.
Simple men should
Simply keep their
Fat mouths drawn tightly.
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Hmm. Provocative. The simplicity gives a nice backdrop for the emotion. nice work.
I don't know, but it's cute. Good work.
This poem makes the reader think
Um...whoa. I don't really know the point of this but um...is there a point?