Clean Up Your Mess

by Nameless_And_Shamed
  • October 31, 2005
  • Poetry
  • Dramatic

Simple women should
Simply keep their
Bony knees drawn tightly.
Simple men should
Simply keep their
Fat mouths drawn tightly.

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timjim77
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timjim77 commented · Sat Nov 05, 2005 6:22 pm

Hmm. Provocative. The simplicity gives a nice backdrop for the emotion. nice work.

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Twinkling Starz
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Twinkling Starz commented · Wed Nov 02, 2005 11:15 am

I don't know, but it's cute. Good work.

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Angel17
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Angel17 commented · Tue Nov 01, 2005 3:36 pm

This poem makes the reader think

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Chevy
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Chevy commented · Mon Oct 31, 2005 8:09 pm

Um...whoa. I don't really know the point of this but um...is there a point?



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