Published November 1, 2005
I can still see you in my dreams
It seems we're still together
In that never-land of my mind
Some magic power you have on me at night
And even though our hearts are far apart
You're still in my dreams
--I guess it doesn't look like a song, but I do have music to it, so I thought I should put it in this forum...?!? :-k
-Amice-
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it was a sweet short poem, i liked it
It's cute.