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Ang920

Ryan Lee

  • Poetry » General, General Re: my writer's anorexia.

    Hello! Ryan here to review :) First off the tittle of the poem really stood out to me. The tittle "My writer's anorexia" popped out amidst all the other poetry ...

    Jul 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Sky Like Spread Legs

    Hello! Ryan here to review :) I enjoyed this short story a lot. The imagery in it is amazing and your word choice is great. I loved how you opened ...

    Jul 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: gay best friend

    Hello! Ryan here the review. First of all I love this so much! Society is so warped by promoting the stereotypical gay guy and the gay best friends, but ignoring ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Screwed It

    hi there Ryan here to review! I enjoyed this poem a lot. You did a very nice job rhyming each line. I often get frustrated when trying to write a ...

    May 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: They Met.

    Hi Ryan here to review! First of all great poem! I love dramatic poems like this. I liked how you have the bolded words throughout the poem. After i finished ...

    May 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Romantic Re: Scented Roads -Ch (1)

    Hi I'm here to review your story :D This might be a little shaky because I usually review poetry, so I apologize. I thought this was really good over all. ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: iv - filters

    This is a great poem. I've never read a poem about the doctor and his companions before. You did a great job in my opinion. my only complaint is the ...

    Apr 30, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: A Letter to Death

    Hello, this poem is amazing! I could feel the writer of this letter growing stronger through out and becoming fearless. The imagery is great in this poem and I love ...

    Apr 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ocean

    Hello, this poem is great. You did a great job at using imagery to help the reader feel like they were lost at sea. You also did a great job ...

    Apr 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Feelings

    I love this so much. I often get that feeling so much and do not know how to put it into words. You did a wonderful job of describing and ...

    Apr 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Darkness

    I really like this. You did a great job at using imagery in this poem. The reader can perceive the darkness perfectly and can tell that the person in this ...

    Apr 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Cutter

    Wow This is really good. Self harm is such a hard topic to talk about and you handled it wonderfully. As someone who deals with this problem I think this ...

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Hold Me Gently

    I really enjoyed this poem. I loved how you found so many words to describe what love is. I usely don't go for the romantic poems, but this one gave ...

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Letters from the cases

    Hi there! Ang920 here to review. This is a great poem. I like the idea of the upper case and lower case trying to prove that they are the best. ...

    Apr 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Four Little Kittens

    Hi there, ang920 here to review. Awww, this is so cute. The title really pulled me in, probably because I have a small obsession with cats. I must say that ...

    Apr 17, 2014


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