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Ang920

Ryan Lee

  • Poetry » General, General Re: my writer's anorexia.

    Hello! Ryan here to review :) First off the tittle of the poem really stood out to me. The tittle "My writer's anorexia" popped out amidst all the other poetry ...

    Jul 10, 2016
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Sky Like Spread Legs

    Hello! Ryan here to review :) I enjoyed this short story a lot. The imagery in it is amazing and your word choice is great. I loved how you opened ...

    Jul 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: gay best friend

    Hello! Ryan here the review. First of all I love this so much! Society is so warped by promoting the stereotypical gay guy and the gay best friends, but ignoring ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Screwed It

    hi there Ryan here to review! I enjoyed this poem a lot. You did a very nice job rhyming each line. I often get frustrated when trying to write a ...

    May 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: They Met.

    Hi Ryan here to review! First of all great poem! I love dramatic poems like this. I liked how you have the bolded words throughout the poem. After i finished ...

    May 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Romantic Re: Scented Roads -Ch (1)

    Hi I'm here to review your story :D This might be a little shaky because I usually review poetry, so I apologize. I thought this was really good over all. ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: iv - filters

    This is a great poem. I've never read a poem about the doctor and his companions before. You did a great job in my opinion. my only complaint is the ...

    Apr 30, 2016
  • Other » Dramatic, Other Re: A Letter to Death

    Hello, this poem is amazing! I could feel the writer of this letter growing stronger through out and becoming fearless. The imagery is great in this poem and I love ...

    Apr 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ocean

    Hello, this poem is great. You did a great job at using imagery to help the reader feel like they were lost at sea. You also did a great job ...

    Apr 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Feelings

    I love this so much. I often get that feeling so much and do not know how to put it into words. You did a wonderful job of describing and ...

    Apr 30, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Darkness

    I really like this. You did a great job at using imagery in this poem. The reader can perceive the darkness perfectly and can tell that the person in this ...

    Apr 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Cutter

    Wow This is really good. Self harm is such a hard topic to talk about and you handled it wonderfully. As someone who deals with this problem I think this ...

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Hold Me Gently

    I really enjoyed this poem. I loved how you found so many words to describe what love is. I usely don't go for the romantic poems, but this one gave ...

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Letters from the cases

    Hi there! Ang920 here to review. This is a great poem. I like the idea of the upper case and lower case trying to prove that they are the best. ...

    Apr 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Four Little Kittens

    Hi there, ang920 here to review. Awww, this is so cute. The title really pulled me in, probably because I have a small obsession with cats. I must say that ...

    Apr 17, 2014


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings