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Draco Malfoy

  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: The Tragedy of My Legs

    Hi! Good lord this is funny. So dry, I though at first you were being serious, which made it funnier! My parents like to make fun of my 'cankles' which ...

    Mar 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Words Come Back To Bite

    Hi! I love how simple, well written, and relatable this is! The things you regret never get old in the memory, like, I regret things I said and done when ...

    Feb 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: My Story... P.2

    Hi! *Gives ten year old you hug* This terrible. You seem like a great person (a million times better than some) *Coughs pointedly* As for a coldhearted reviewer (kidding) I ...

    Feb 26, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: A lovers Disagreement.

    Dear lord. This is most definitely horror, it gave me shivers and is exactly why I don't read horror! Lol. Okay, away from the looking over the shoulder feeling, you ...

    Feb 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Salty Start

    Hi! I like how you open this very serious work with a story book feel. Also, how you separate the paragraphs with lines of her dialogue creates a very nice ...

    Feb 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Other Re: Teenager

    Hi! I'm really glad you shared this here. I can relate to a lot of the feelings here, and I would give you a over the internet hug but I ...

    Feb 22, 2020
  • Other » Teen Fiction, General Re: My Story...

    Hi! AndName again and I applaud you! Also, really smiling cause I can actually give good advice! This piece, while short and sad, is amazing because you can feel the ...

    Feb 22, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Communication

    Hi! I love how magical, mysterious, and tragic this is. You introduced the characters, set about the conflict, then killed them. Good job! lol. I very much like fairies and ...

    Feb 20, 2020
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: The Dragons Lullaby

    Hi! Okay. The first part of it I was a-reading and I was kind of confused. The kids were like "THIS ISN'T A SONG!" and I was like, "What? This ...

    Feb 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: outlawed

    Hi! I like this story so far, it's a great idea with lots of ways you could go with it! The fact that the 'program' does the picking of who's ...

    Feb 18, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Literature Re: The Sculptor's Knife: Chapter 3.1

    ANOTHER ONE. You go! This is exactly what I was talking about in the other review. More action time for the characters. I love it. They've moved to Lily's house ...

    Feb 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Literature Re: The Sculptor's Knife: Chapter 2.2

    I have been waiting so long. So long Months. And i leap in joy because contrary to what I thought, you did not give up. Review time. First, I never ...

    Feb 17, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: I want to be a writer...

    Hi! I once read on one of the dozens (possibly hundreds) of writing articles i've read this - If you write, you're a writer! I take a huge amount of ...

    Feb 16, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Voodoo part 4

    Hi! This is not as confusing as you said it would be! Very shocking though, in a good way. So Dae's friends are worried and mutiny is in the air...and ...

    Feb 15, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Curtains - Pt.1

    Hi! Here to review this story! Okay, you wrote a killer opening sentence. It instantly makes you wonder what's happening and why the curtains are involved. I really like the ...

    Feb 13, 2020


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