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Re: Chapter One of Something that goes unnamed as of yet
Hey, felidae. AnarchyWolf here for this Review Day. So, let's do it! “You smell... delicious," "You smell... delicious." There should be a full stop at the end of this. narrowed.“Fire!” ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Such Tracks!-Chapter 9-Part 2 of 3 Finale
Hi, MrMuddyPig. AnarchyWolf here to review on this fine Review Day. I haven't read the previous installments of this story, so I apologise in advance if I misunderstand or don't ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Cataclysm: Chapter 2; Harley
Hello, NympheaLily. I'm here to review this second chapter. So, let's do it! (I'm afraid that I haven't read the first chapter, so sorry if I misunderstand or just don't ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Watching
Good evening Laurenh6. AnarchyWolf here to review this first chapter, as promised. There are already a lot of reviews here, so mine probably won't tell you anything new. Anyway, here ...
Aug 29, 2016 -
Re: Gifted Vision
Good evening, kavita227. AnarchyWolf here to review this short story. While only short, this work shows off good imagery and vocabulary. No important word is used twice, and phrases like ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: The Beging of the final chapter of Satan's Children
Good afternoon, Holiday30. AnarchyWolf here to review. The tension in this piece is very well-done. There's tension all the way through, as well as sadness when Isaiah goes back to ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Castellum Chapter 2
Good afternoon, Oswin1800. AnarchyWolf here to review this second chapter. My favourite thing about this chapter is the friendship between Michael and Persephone. I love how they interact and how ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Heroes of Aldrizhon (Chapter 8)
Good afternoon, yizhongt. AnarchyWolf here to review this eighth chapter. I'll first tell you that I haven't read through the earlier chapters, so some plot points are probably going to ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Deleted
Good morning, MoonFlower. AnarchyWolf here to review this first chapter. There are really good descriptions in here, especially describing the landscape and the storm. The reader gets vivid images of ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Dr. Carnival - the loony sequel
Good morning, godlypopo. AnarchyWolf here to review this short story. First off - Woah. This was really good. I feel so bad for Sam. Everything you've written makes the reader ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Rickety Ranch Rescue Center Chp. 1
Good morning, Gymnast2801. AnarchyWolf here to review this first chapter. I love the horse-related descriptions in this chapter. There's so much of it and it works so well, especially comparing ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: the edvencher of Jake, chapter one Jake's dad has gon mad!
Good evening, SleepyBacon. AnarchyWolf here to review this first chapter. There's a really interesting premise here, and I especially like how only those who truly believe seem to be able ...
Aug 26, 2016 -
Re: chapter 6 of goblin of darkness
Good afternoon, SmaugsIntern. AnarchyWolf here to review this sixth chapter. There's so much drama in this chapter! You're showing other sides of the characters, making them into more fleshed-out and ...
Aug 23, 2016 -
Re: Fae
Good afternoon, Philderp4543. AnarchyWolf here to review this introduction. The friendship forming between these two girls is really lovely. I love Fae's hope and new happiness after Elizabeth starts
Aug 20, 2016 -
Re: The Cave - Chapter VI - Breaking Into the Castle
Good evening, CupcakesForRealMen. AnarchyWolf here to review this sixth chapter. The characters here are strong and very entertaining to read about. They get along together well, and their interaction
Aug 12, 2016
