Amnesia

Hey dear, Mem here for a review so lets get down to it then. I feel this on a level somewhat as I've just gone through a nasty break up, ...

hey there Whosa, its the friendly neighborhood memory here! I want to start off by saying that this has potential to be a great song/poem depending on the course you ...

Hey marms, it's the friendly neighborhood memory coming at you for a review. It's a fairly short poem which is great but it could be better with a little more ...

Hey there, Mem here for a review on your poem! I saw you said that you needed help with poetry and though I'm probably not that great at it myself ...

Hey there, Mem here for a review. Happy review day! First things first, who is this "he" I want to know more about him and the connection he has to ...

Hey there, Mem here for a review and Happy Review Day! I read this twice for clarification on what I wanted to say before writing this. Hopefully it helps. Jumping ...

Hi there, Mem here to review your poem, Happy review day. First thing I noted when reading through this is the lack of imagery. That's really important for conveying something ...

Hey there, Mem here to review your short story here. I noticed that you had a quote to start with and while that's a great hook for the short story ...

Hey there Pen, as indirectly promised is my review, Welcome to the site btw I didnt get a chance earlier in chat as I was in and out due to ...

Hi there, Memory here for a review. Lets jump into this shall we, first things first your formatting is an eyesore, YWS likes to change formatting regardless so I'm gonna ...

Hi My name is Memory and I'm here to review this for you. First thing I noticed right away is the lack of formatting. This link should help out a ...

I love the Imagery here and I'm not sure praise will be all that helpful here but maybe adding the S I N N E R to the end of ...

Hey Matt, as promised Im writing this review, whether it's helpful or not will be decided by you. As I read through this I can envision the moving pavement, it's ...

Hey there, Memory here for a review! (a very belated welcome to you ^.^ and a very early happy YWS Birthday

Hey Calamitys, happy review day :) I want to say thank you for writing this, it's very relateable to me because isnt that what those of us with depression, anxiety, ...