AmeliaCogin

Hello! This poem is very interesting. I'd love to know the meaning behind the words. ( PM me if you fancy) I liked some of the imagery used, and the ...

Hi: I liked this poem. It was sweet. I didn't have to rely on the spoiler, and since my spanish is pretty basic, that's probably a bad thing. That's just ...

Hey! I really liked this poem. It was sharp and quirky and very dramatic. I liked the essence and the theme of the poem, though I do think this particular ...

Hi! I really liked this piece. I loved the whole from baby to 16-year-old thing. Very imaginaive and sweet. However, some of your descriptions were awkward and a like cringe-worthy. ...

Hello! Just dropped by for a quick review. I really liked this piece. It flowed smoothly and you used some pretty powerful imagery. However, sadly your spelling and grammer brought ...

Hi Jill! I have to begin by saying I didn't like this at all. It didn't flow and some of the rhymes used were cringy - sorry for the harsh ...

Hi! For me, this is like a cross between christina and bruno....but I believe you if you said it didn't have an influence on your writing. I liked this poem. ...

Hello! Well, I do like this poem. Your vocab was excellent and the poem flowed nicely. I liked the layout and your grammar was fine. I don't personally get it ...

Hi! From one fellow coffee addict to another, I loved this poem. You've put how great coffee really is for the world to see in an excellently-worded and pretty much ...

Hey new memeber! Welcome! First of all, I really liked this piece. The concept was lovely and it was well executed. Erm..I think your title needs re-spelling: grandpants? Grandparents. Yanni ...

Here to review as requested! OK, so first off, I'll say that your story telling skills are excellent. The piece flowed smoothly and your description, especially of the wyvern, was ...

Hi! First of all, loved this title. Very intruging. I liked the wording of your poem and the description therein. The flow was nice and paced. Gramatically though, there were ...

Hi! first of all, welcome to YWS! If you need anything at all, don't hesitate to PM me with a question or two! This poem was...unusual. I liked it. The ...

Hi! I agree totally with thescratchman: this is a brill first poem. However, I do understand how apathy can be monotomous, if a little more discouraging. You definately need some ...

Hi! I'm not stalking you, honestly. I'm just reviewing things with no comments! I liked this piece. It was short, simplistic, and dramatic. No gramatical errors I can spy, so ...