Alvarin

Thank you for the review :3 He is quite mysterious at the moment, yes, and I'm intending to gradually let people know more about his life and what happened, though ...

Oh, I see :) I definitely think you should thrown in a works cited list, even though you're only using those two texts. Also, you could check if you're supposed ...

Ooh.. I did read it again, and I think I get it now, sorry for being stupid xD Though my mind automatically goes to death and murderers, but I guess ...

Thank you so much! This is only the first chapter, so it'll become clear why I labeled it as I did in the later chapters ;)

Yes, I noticed. Thank you, but you didn't need to ;)

I see your point, but I wanted this to be a bit jumbled and confusing, not quite making sense - hence it's all pressed together like that. The main character ...

Haha, this is awesome xD Your really managed to capture Gollum's way of speaking. It's awesome. You should write more of these ;)

I love it :3

Ignore this.

Thanks, Blackie :3 I made some changes. The man in the brook is going to be described more in the next part, I just wanted to give a quick first ...

Thanks for the advise. I've changed a bit :)

Thank you! :D I've changed the fonts like a thousand times but it never looks right.. I'll give it one more try.

There should be a white "edit" button to the right of the text.

This is an amazing piece. From the moment I began to read I was sucked in. The lack of descriptions of the characters and setting triggers the reader's imagination (kind ...