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Heya, KT! I read 'A Familiar Taste of Poison' on the bus on my way home, mainly because the title was also the name of a song I like, and ...

Heya, Deanie c: Woopiii, this is gonna be the review that will earn me my next star. Righty. So what I love about this poem is that it combined chemistry ...

Heya DRG c: So, I realise that this is a fanfic and I should like know the 'realm' you're talking about but whatever here I am. This is gonna be ...

Heya. Here to review your song. I'll give you my overall impression first: This lyrics are fine, but they could be better. Like, there's too much telling and not a ...

Hi there. You've been here for a while yet I think this is the first time I've seen you.. weird. Anyway, this poem. Basically, it reads somewhat satisfyingly. Somewhat because ...

Heya, Madam Clare c: So my over-all opinion about this short story is generally positive ^^ There are a few nit-picks that bother me (just my opinion about choice of ...

Hey Dreamy. Alpha here to review. So first, I'll start with the title. Dear you! When I read the title, my first impression was a situation in which the narrator ...

Hi there, Jcsmooth! Here to review your piece. I see that you're new here, and already you have two shiny starts. Well done :) Righty, so I'll start my review ...

Shoaib ^^ First of all, salam! All right, so here I am to review zis poem of yours. First, let me say that I've read a couple of your poems ...

Little bird, long time no see ^^ Righty, so I'll review your poem now. I'll begin with my overall reaction: this was damn good. I really loved the layout, the ...

Hello Malinda! Alpha here to review your poem. You mentioned in the description that this is a nostalgic poem. It sure is, heh >< I wish you left that out ...

Daaaaaw :') Ehem. Please excuse my unprofessional outburst. It's just that my story-in-progress has a similar situation to this poem (a queen and a knightttttt... but in a different way ...

Hi there, Alpha here to review your poem. I love how powerful the emotions are here. Description is minimal yet what we have of it sets the scene up clearly ...

Hi there, ATS :) I see that you're fairly new here, so um welcome and all that. So to summarize my reaction to this story: Oh my glob. This is ...

Hello there, Neko :) I'm just in love with this poem. Seriously, I love it. It's just the right length and it flows nicely but what got me was the ...