Alpha

D'aw. From the opening lines I knew I'm going to be a sucker for this against my will. xD Instead of reading to enjoy, I kept rereading some sentences and ...

Goddamn. *surreptitiously scratches skin* This was a good read. Some things are left unanswered: Did Laurel send the bed-bugs? And why would she do it if his only crime was ...

Hi there! Alpha here to review... Love 'Strinks'? What does strink mean? Love Stinks , perhaps? I'll start with some line-for-line comments, then a little point-outs about structure and format. ...

Gods, this was funny . I've read Hundred Pound Catastrophe before and I'm impressed by your ability to inject humor into your writings without it sounding forced, and the premise ...

Hi there, Rhia! Here to review your poem. My first impression of this was it's a bit... rambly. Rather choppy, to agree with Thewriter13, but beneath that I think this ...

Hey, therealme! I believe we haven't really met before. Let's get to reviewing, then. The first time I read this, I lost focus at the last part because of the ...

Hi, Pomp! I gotta say, the first thing I thought of when I saw the title was The Fault in Our Stars, infinity being a recurring theme there. But while ...

Hi there, Pomp! So of course, I don't need to reiterate what has been said already in other people's reviews. But as much as I want to gush over how ...

Just here to leave a tiny semi-useless review. ^-^ I'm really enjoying this. Action chapter! I would agree with Lauren about starting as close to the action as possible, but ...

Hihihi. Now this is some story. The first thing I noticed is how choppy the writing is. In a sentence, the whole scene changes, time periods pass during unimportant details, ...

BlueAfrica! This is a hooking beginning you have. I'm usually not into 'short chapters' (I think it has to do with the Goosebumps series employing them- I hated that series) ...

Heya! You know, there was a time in my life when whenever things got bad for me, I'd go, "Well at least I'm not {insert name of famed beings who ...

Hiya, Niteowl! So, this will be my first-ish attempt to review a short poem, but I'll give it a try. Bear with me through this! I'll start with the title, ...

Heya people, I'm here to take off ma clothes and dance joking I'm here to review mwahaha. Okay. Short poem, heavy on emotions and cliches and some forced rhyming. That's ...

Heya, DreamWork This poem is very short- that doesn't mean it's a bad poem c: Length isn't an issue when it comes to poetry, so you're safe there. are like ...