AliyahPillage

I'm sorry Kyllorac but some people in this world are dyslexic and I am one of those people, that's no excuse for bad writing but I'm also just a beginner, ...

You see the problem with my multiplication is that I meant to write thirteen districts in total, but I only put twelve so with thirteen there should be fifty six ...

I think this is a very nice poem you've got talent keep it up

This was meant to represent the nazi camps during world war II and the holocaust

Oh my gosh this is a really nice poem, I love how every other line rhymed just because if I'm rhyming the whole stanza has to rhyme, nice job with ...

I love how you made your point with such little words, It's a nice poem. One thing I had trouble with was that the lines are long and there's many ...

I loved the whole poem, but my favorite part was the last stanza. "I will teach you a lesson; it’s not okay to die I will burn the ground in ...

I really love the flow and beat of this poem :D Keep up the good work.

I love how you used the fire and ice concept, this is a very nice piece of poetry, keep up the good work.

Wow that is amazing, keep up the good work.

This was a very nice poem, I enjoyed the beginning of it the most, keep working.

I found this to be a very lovely poem, the beginning didn't make much sense to me although it might mean something personal to you. other than that keep writing ...

I loved the hunger games so naturally I would love this, you did a great job. I hope you keep them coming.

It was a very nice poem although it was very long so I had some trouble understanding and concentrating on it.

I love this poem a lot. We tumble out of our addiction and find ourselves falling away from each other. This was my favorite stanza. Keep writing!