Published April 29, 2012
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Hey, Bog. ^-^
I must say, this poem brought tears to my eyes.
Your devotion towards faf is greatly evident through this work of true art.
There is not a single thing I could say to prefect this piece in the slightest.
Kudos to your wonderful, everlasting love!
Cheers. xx
This is turly touching and beautiferous. Fafnir is a lucky woman to have you.
I love how you made your point with such little words, It's a nice poem. One thing I had trouble with was that the lines are long and there's many places they could be broken down into stanza's but it's also nice as it is. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the feedback, the thing is that I rushed this out in under three minutes to parody most of the depressing poems I see in the new work feed all day every day. Mostly I did it as a joke for a friend who I was waiting for last night that never came on chat. However thank you for your feedback none the less.
My eyes are bleeding from the emo-ness.
I like it, though.