Published May 2, 2012
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would you still say she looked beautiful?
If you couldn't hear,
would you still say she sang better than the birds?
If you couldn't speak,
would you find a way to compliment her?
If she left you,
would you miss her?
If you left her,
would you regret it?
If your friends didn't like her,
would you?
If her parents didn't like you,
would you make them?
If you love her,
you must prove it.
I found nothing to nit-pick in this poetry! Its very well written and you have talent, keep it up Maggie!
NHNT
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I think this is a very nice poem you've got talent keep it up
Not rhyming, but very nice. I shall too prove my love, NOT. I still love it.