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Very good poem. It's true for most of the world too.
"Solders falling
After so long
The kings are crawling" these three lines are the best part (in my opinion). And I love how the poem just flows as I read on. Really nice job, this poem was nicely written. Keep on writing.
Oh my gosh this is a really nice poem, I love how every other line rhymed just because if I'm rhyming the whole stanza has to rhyme, nice job with this poem. Keep up the good work.