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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: 3:A.M *Not finished*

    Hello fellow writer person! I AM HERE TO REVIEW! Okay so first off, I think it’s funny that we both have stories called “3 Am.” Ahahaha. Anyways! I really liked ...

    Nov 28, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Day

    Woah, man! This story is AMAZING, everything about it. It has a great moral to it, and I believe a lot of people should read this, because it sends such ...

    Nov 27, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Yuki... (Snow)

    Hello, Cake here to review this! Okay so, I think (in my opinion) the 3rd and 4th Stanzas were the best written in this poem. Those Stanzas flowed really nicely. ...

    Nov 26, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Puzzle Pieces

    Heyyy, I'm here to review! Okay, so first I want to say, this poem is really nice. It's something a lot of people could most likely relate to sometime in ...

    Nov 26, 2018
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: That's Christmas To Me

    Hello, I’m here to review! Okay so I’m going to start off with the things I like. I really like your descriptions, you made me see an image in my ...

    Nov 24, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: let me be hope

    Hello, I’m here to review! The first thing I want to say is that this poem was written beautifully, and I definitely couldn’t of done something like this ahahaha. So ...

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Safe Place

    Hiya! I’m reviewing! Okay, I want to start off by saying, this piece is really meaningful, from what I see. I think a lot of people could probably relate to ...

    Nov 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Who would I be

    Hello, I'm reviewing because this is a really nice poem! I really liked the rhymes and the way you worded the lines, it flowed mostly smoothly. And I really like ...

    Nov 12, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Eyes On You

    Wow! This story literally made me feel anxious XD. I think it was really good, there was a few spelling mistakes, but nothing to take away from the actual story. ...

    Nov 9, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Fuel

    Reviewing!!! :D Okay So I think your poem was really good and I “live on it.” Okay sorry XD that was a bad joke. Anyways, I can see that you ...

    Nov 9, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Narrative Re: Seen: 12:39 AM

    Heyyyyy, I'm reviewing! Okay so I think your story was really good, and I think that you did decent with describing. Because I still imagined something, you also described the ...

    Nov 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Culture, Health Re: Say something please

    Hello, ima review this really nice poem! So first, I want to start out by saying, that this is a poem I think a lot of people need. Self acceptance ...

    Nov 7, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Why me?

    Hiya! I’m making a review! Your poem is really short but also really powerful, and I can feel a lot of meaning in this poem. I feel like I have ...

    Nov 7, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Rotten Touch

    Hiya! I decided to review your poem because it seemed like an interesting title. And, honestly, your poem was really well written and executed. Even thought not all the lines ...

    Nov 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: M.A.D.I.S.O.N

    Hiya! IT'S REVIEW TIME! I think your poem was excellent and illustrated true friendship and i'm sure Madison enjoyed it. Great last line XD. I think your poem was really ...

    Nov 5, 2018


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