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Re: vulnerability
Hallo, I'm sure everyone else has already told you, but this poem rocks! I really liked the questions and thought provoking lines. You also had a great ending that really ...
Apr 22, 2019 -
Re: I am not a monster (pt. 2/2)
Heyyy, I’m here to review! I liked this story and I read both parts, I liked the idea of the story. Although it’s kind of dark, this was a cool ...
Mar 28, 2019 -
Re: Asking the Time (V2)
Howdy y’all! I’m here to review this. I’m going to start with what I like. I really liked the beginning, it pulled me in and kept me fascinated, making me ...
Feb 23, 2019 -
Re: What Is Music?
Hello! I’m here to review this piece! Okay so I really like this it’s short, sweet, but also impactful and it’s something I most likely wouldn’t have thought of. I ...
Feb 23, 2019 -
Re: Fairy Diary | Day 9
Hai, I am here to review this! Okay so ima admit, I haven’t read all of your chapters, ahahaha. But I still sort of grasp the storyline, so that’s a ...
Feb 23, 2019 -
Re: Jack's Torment
Heyo! I’m here to review jack and his tournament Amazingness. Alright so I’m gonna start with the things I like. I like the fact that you were able to tell ...
Feb 23, 2019 -
Re: Satisfaction (SPOKEN WORD)
Hallo! I'm here to review this! I honestly like this poem, it has a lot of emotion and it expresses it quite clearly. I can feel your passive aggressiveness. As ...
Feb 23, 2019 -
Re: Eyes that should never be Seen
Haiiii I’m here to review! -SHOCKED EXPRESSION- Okay so anyways, this poem actually kind of reminded me of beauty and the beast, but at the same time it was different. ...
Feb 1, 2019 -
Re: To Kiss A Rainbow
Hiya! Ima review this. Okay so first I’m going to start off by saying that the lines gave me clear images of what they might look like. And I think ...
Feb 1, 2019 -
Re: Deaths' Truth and Life's Lie
Hello! I’m here to review. Okay so first I think this poem flows extremely well, and I think it’s a really cool poem in general. Like others have stated, I ...
Jan 27, 2019 -
Re: The Black Dahlia: A True Story
Welp I’m here to review/say opinion! Okay so at the beginning, to me it sounded like you were in sleep paralysis of some sort, either that or it was a ...
Jan 16, 2019 -
Re: Negative 02
Hallo! I’m here to review this! Okay so I actually really like this poem, and I feel like you threw a lot of emotion and effort into this poem. Which ...
Jan 14, 2019 -
Re: Peace (My second grade book)
Wow. This is the best writing I’ve ever read, hands down. XD! I remember also writing stories when I was like 7..... but we don’t talk about those stories 0_0 ...
Jan 4, 2019 -
Re: Without Sanity
Heyyy I’m here to review! Okay so I’m going to start with what I like about this poem: I really for some reason liked the repeated lines “I still believe ...
Dec 16, 2018 -
Re: Growth
Heyyy, I’m here to review this! Okay so this is a short but sweet poem, which is cool. I wish it were a little longer though, in my opinion. I ...
Dec 1, 2018
