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Re: Future
Maddy, hey! Here am I, Alf, to give a review! A Kudos Revue, may work best perhaps? The Future! Ah a beautiful, although common, title! It certainly gave me a ...
Jan 6, 2013 -
Re: Our Summer Escaped
It has escaped, the summer has escaped! Oh, wait. That's me being hysterical...again. Anyways, Alf here for a review about the poem titled 'Our Summer Escaped'. Can it be my ...
Jan 1, 2013 -
Re: So Long
Hey Marauder. Knocking on your door is Alf for a quick review. I'll do a Chop-Up for yer, so please do pay lots of attention! For four whole years, I've ...
Dec 31, 2012 -
Re: The War
THE WAR! Yes, I'd be glad to review this, Coley :) Anyways, on the review. I'll first give my general impression and suggestions and hit it verse by verse. Okay, ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Let there be no miracle!!
Shilpa! Hey, Alf here for a review. Since you're my buena mano for today, I'll stick the Quick Critique on the piece, Let There Be No Miracle! STYLE: :D :D ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Life Rejoicing
Sunny! Hey, Alf here for a very short Quick Critique on your lovely poem, Life Rejoicing! CONTENT & THEME: :D :D :D :D Lovely :) There is a spark of ...
Dec 16, 2012 -
Re: A Little Shop of Hearts
Celtica! Hi there :) I'm dropping by to give a Chop-up review, wherein I'll quote parts of your piece and comment on it. Ready? Blinds drawn over clear windows I ...
Dec 16, 2012 -
Re: Warsong
Lyc! Here for a review! Oooh, a poem on adventure! It's been a long while since I've read one! I'll make it a Chop-Up, a type of review I invented ...
Dec 15, 2012 -
Re: Dawning
Tindy D., good evening (in my time zone)! Long time no see. It makes me miss your poetic pieces. Here's a very short review from me on the Dawning. First ...
Dec 15, 2012 -
Re: The Inferno
Alex! Hey! I'm Alf and I'm here for a very short review! May this one help your piece improve! OVERVIEW Wow, I like this one! Common elements of poetry are ...
Dec 15, 2012 -
Re: ~
This, Pers, is art! I never thought I can think of it, no, seriously. It seemed very static, and yet each curve brings about movement and flow. Is this a ...
Dec 14, 2012 -
Re: Almost Only Counts With Horseshoes and Hand Grenades
Good day, mate! Here for a very quick Kudos Revue for this endearing piece with a blockbuster title, Almost Only Counts With Horseshoes and Hand Grenades First of all, the ...
Dec 14, 2012 -
Re: The Lucky Ones
Hey Sunx! Just dropping by for a Quick Critique on your piece, The Lucky Ones. CONTENT & THEME: :D :D :D :D I really like the broad idea you installed ...
Dec 14, 2012 -
Re: Here We Are
Hey Peng! Dropping by for a random review! PENNY FOR A THOUGHT I really like the concept of the opening of the piece. The use of the word 'language' became ...
Dec 12, 2012 -
Re: Dear Lorraine
Hey Devan :) I just found the piece you've submitted to the clinic today! Sorry for that :( But hey, I'm here and ready for a review! Hmmm, this is ...
Dec 12, 2012
