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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Future

    Maddy, hey! Here am I, Alf, to give a review! A Kudos Revue, may work best perhaps? The Future! Ah a beautiful, although common, title! It certainly gave me a ...

    Jan 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Our Summer Escaped

    It has escaped, the summer has escaped! Oh, wait. That's me being hysterical...again. Anyways, Alf here for a review about the poem titled 'Our Summer Escaped'. Can it be my ...

    Jan 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: So Long

    Hey Marauder. Knocking on your door is Alf for a quick review. I'll do a Chop-Up for yer, so please do pay lots of attention! For four whole years, I've ...

    Dec 31, 2012
  • Poetry » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: The War

    THE WAR! Yes, I'd be glad to review this, Coley :) Anyways, on the review. I'll first give my general impression and suggestions and hit it verse by verse. Okay, ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Let there be no miracle!!

    Shilpa! Hey, Alf here for a review. Since you're my buena mano for today, I'll stick the Quick Critique on the piece, Let There Be No Miracle! STYLE: :D :D ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Life Rejoicing

    Sunny! Hey, Alf here for a very short Quick Critique on your lovely poem, Life Rejoicing! CONTENT & THEME: :D :D :D :D Lovely :) There is a spark of ...

    Dec 16, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: A Little Shop of Hearts

    Celtica! Hi there :) I'm dropping by to give a Chop-up review, wherein I'll quote parts of your piece and comment on it. Ready? Blinds drawn over clear windows I ...

    Dec 16, 2012
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, General Re: Warsong

    Lyc! Here for a review! Oooh, a poem on adventure! It's been a long while since I've read one! I'll make it a Chop-Up, a type of review I invented ...

    Dec 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Dawning

    Tindy D., good evening (in my time zone)! Long time no see. It makes me miss your poetic pieces. Here's a very short review from me on the Dawning. First ...

    Dec 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Inferno

    Alex! Hey! I'm Alf and I'm here for a very short review! May this one help your piece improve! OVERVIEW Wow, I like this one! Common elements of poetry are ...

    Dec 15, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: ~

    This, Pers, is art! I never thought I can think of it, no, seriously. It seemed very static, and yet each curve brings about movement and flow. Is this a ...

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Almost Only Counts With Horseshoes and Hand Grenades

    Good day, mate! Here for a very quick Kudos Revue for this endearing piece with a blockbuster title, Almost Only Counts With Horseshoes and Hand Grenades First of all, the ...

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The Lucky Ones

    Hey Sunx! Just dropping by for a Quick Critique on your piece, The Lucky Ones. CONTENT & THEME: :D :D :D :D I really like the broad idea you installed ...

    Dec 14, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Here We Are

    Hey Peng! Dropping by for a random review! PENNY FOR A THOUGHT I really like the concept of the opening of the piece. The use of the word 'language' became ...

    Dec 12, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Dear Lorraine

    Hey Devan :) I just found the piece you've submitted to the clinic today! Sorry for that :( But hey, I'm here and ready for a review! Hmmm, this is ...

    Dec 12, 2012


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