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  • Short Story » Narrative, Humor Re: Solitude

    Abelgaiya! Salutations, good sir! I see you're being an advocate of solitude, eh? Anyways, Abel, let me hit you up with a very simple review about your writing style :) ...

    Jan 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Angel Wings

    Aouther! Hey, I, Alfred the great and marvelous am here to review your very angelic piece, Angel Wings! Prepare yourself! *woooosh* IMPRESSIONS MATTER: Let's see, Angel Wings. What do people ...

    Jan 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If I Became a Memory

    Grenade! What an explosive name you have there, miss! And that also means that your work is mightily explosive! Let me give you a Quick Critique for this piece! CONCEPT ...

    Jan 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I was dead

    Keepit, Keepit, Keepit! Hey, here's a review from me to you! Let me give you a Chop-up review for this lovely piece of yours. First of all, I want to ...

    Jan 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Poetry Through Song

    Ohmigash Devan, a poem from you! Oh, it would be haven for me to critique such a beautiful piece. So, let's bang this one head-on with a Quick Critique. Let ...

    Jan 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Night Studio

    Carefully, carefully I write this review of mine to you! Here's my Kudos Revue for this lovingly short piece of yours, Night Studio! Let's tackle your title first. Not only ...

    Jan 16, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: Gateway to the Supernatural (2)

    Abel! Hey, Alf here for a review! Ain't it very...creepy here? Waaah! What was that!? Oh, it's your story. It's because it's supernatural . Get it, supernatural? Oh forget itl, ...

    Jan 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Paris

    Ahh! Le Paris est très magnifique, and of course, also ce poème! For that, let me give you one of my Chop-Up Critiques! But first, of course, is my general ...

    Jan 13, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Preaching to the Choir

    Magpie! Wait, it's me, AGAIN! Wow, look at that. Fate works its wonders. But hey, it's the panda to blame, not destiny. On other news, let's just go on with ...

    Jan 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Deleted

    Maggie, Maggie, Magpie! Hooray for your first every post at the Literary Section! Glad to have you, and this beautiful poem of yours, of course, too. Firstly, let me give ...

    Jan 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Death for All

    Staaaaary! Hey, sorry for the many A's. But anyways, let's get to my review for your lovely work, Death for All. Okay, so upon reading the piece, I can see ...

    Jan 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Pixie Dust and Rabbit Holes

    Anna dear! It's nice to see one of your lovely works! And now I get to comment on them, yippie :D BON DIGITY! Ignoring my vast pools of excite, let's ...

    Jan 11, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Greys and The Greens

    Hey Seastormy! Congrats for posting your first piece! For that, lemme give you a review as a gift :) INSIGHTS: It's an very nice piece all and all. If I ...

    Jan 10, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Other Re: Z-Day

    Hey Deeeeeeepblack! Just Alf paying a visit in this thread...and ha , I'm also here for a review! Caught you in the eye, huh? Ain't my acting becoming better and ...

    Jan 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: To My Grandma

    Hi Kanade. I admire the effort you gave trying to fill up that empty space left by your grandmother an all, and of course, the time you rendered to pen ...

    Jan 6, 2013


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