Aley

Hey Arthy, I'm Aley and I thought I'd just stop by to say Welcome! We're really glad to have you here on YWS and if you haven't gotten a moment ...

Hello skylnn00writes! Welcome to Poetry!! Today I'm going to be following the YWS standard for the review. That formula is our Reviewing Sandwich and it ensures that we get long ...

Hey Marms, I'm going to keep this short while I stretch my reviewing legs again. I haven't been that active lately and your PM poked me into doing something, so ...

Hello TheChristianWriter First off, welcome to YWS! You're here at just the right time to get a lot of reviews on poems and things. Overall, I think this poem has ...

Hello Queenie I think the strength of this piece is that it doesn't try to have really flowery language. A lot of times poems will attempt to really build up ...

Hey Feltrix, I like the tone of the story. You have a good sense of plot and you are moving it ahead nicely. The more I read, the more I ...

Hey Ventomology, So all in all I think that one of your strengths is your willingness and ability to create this world. It's clearly all your own and the more ...

Hello Sathalha! I'm glad to be reviewing someone new. I'm here to give you my opinion about what you've written and since it's rather long, I'm actually going to be ...

Hey Scar! So overall, you have my attention with this chapter, which is good since it's chapter four and usually you want things off the ground by 3 since that's ...

Nikayla, I like the last stanza. You're working in the ethereal with some of this and it feels a little touch and go, like you're not quite making concrete sense ...

Hello all, I love your username, but I'm here for your poem. I suppose I have to start by saying your opening stanza didn't really bring me in because of ...

Yeah, okay. I've been around the block a few times and I saw that one coming. Once you start talking about similarities, togetherness, all that stuff, it's really obvious to ...

Hey SilverFox, I've followed your poetry for a while now, and I think that you're definitely getting better. What I like about this poem is that you're weaving a story ...

Hey Jimss23, First time reader of this story, so I'll just admit that up front. Overall, I feel like you do a good job moving the story through its progression. ...

Hey Nutty! I think I've seen you around a time or two? Your name is familiar to me. Anyway, I wanted something to eat and I stumbled onto your poem, ...