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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 4

    Hi there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to give your fourth chapter a review/comment. Yeah, it's me again. I'll give another detailed review again because you story is ...

    Jul 9, 2023


  • Hi there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment on your wonderful poem. I just love it and I wanted to review it but I am still on ...

    Jul 9, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Experiences: Nine

    Hi there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment on your poem. Ahhh, I just love your poems in your series, "Experiences: one, two, three, and so on". ...

    Jul 9, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: i'm the ashes falling into the tray

    Hi there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment on your poem. It is short yet beautiful

    Jul 7, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Repercussions: Part Eight

    Hello there! I hope you are safe, where ever you are! This is loveissourgrapes and my plan here is to review/comment on such a lovely work. I love theme, it ...

    Jul 6, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic
    Re: Childhood Room

    Hi there! This is loveissourgrapes sending a review/comment for your poem. I remember reviewing this but maybe it was just a dream. I love reading and reviewing poems that have ...

    Jul 6, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic
    Re: Love in decaying hearts: Part Three

    Hello there @vampricone6783! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to send a quick comment or review for your story. Compared to the other parts of this series, I felt ...

    Jul 5, 2023

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative
    Re: Emerald - Chapter 1

    Hello there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment on your story. It feels like that movie "Spirit" maybe because of the horse there. Is it inspired? I ...

    Jul 5, 2023

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other
    Re: The Tortoise

    Hello there! This is loveissourgrapes and I ma here to send another review/comment on another poem about tortoises. By the way, I think they are really cute. It changed how ...

    Jul 3, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Five Wishes ~Chapter One~

    Hiya! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment the first chapter of your novel/chapter, Five Wishes. I am starting to like a lot of novel/chapters recently especially there ...

    Jul 3, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Chapter 3

    Hi there! I get to review another chapter of yours of this lovely and interesting novel of yours. This is loveissourgrapes sending you support and a comment/review. loading... Annabel never ...

    Jul 2, 2023

  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic
    Re: Whispers of the Deep

    Good day! This is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I am here to send a review/comment. It's funny how there are a lot of people in here that view the ocean ...

    Jul 1, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor
    Re: Ode To Old Friends

    Hello there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment on your poem. This poem feels like in each color of each friends eyes has different themes that match ...

    Jul 1, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction
    Re: Chapter one- The Beginning

    Hello there and welcome to YWS! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to give you a review/comment for your interesting novel/chapter. I will also look forward to the upcoming ...

    Jun 30, 2023

  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor
    Re: Dear Human: NOT a Turtle

    Hello there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to give a little comment/review on your fun poem. This poem is perfect for the tortoise race, hihi. Cute cover art ...

    Jun 30, 2023


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