AfterTheStorm

Hey, Grav! Stormsie here to review for you tonight on behalf of the Earthbenders. Let's get started! First, I just wanted to say that I love your opening line. I ...

Hey, Drac! It's Stormsie here to review for you tonight! Happy Review Day, fellow Greenie. :D I just wanted to say that I'm typically not a fan of fanfiction (heh), ...

Hey, Esca! Stormsie here to review your short story. :) Let's jump right in... The first thing I noticed was a subtle change from past tense to present tense in ...

Morning, shoaib! It's Stormsie here to review for ya, per request. :) I'm certain most users on the site can relate quite closely to "Dear Verse", adding so much more ...

Hey, HighTop! It's Stormsie here per request! I'm sensing some sort of hidden anger in this possibly? xD Haha I know a really good therapist... But in all seriousness, your ...

Hey, Aquestioning! It's Stormsie here to review for ya per request! :) By the way, for one who "sucks at poetry", you did a splendid job. You're just being too ...

Hey, Camoryn! :D The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for ya this morning! Your original text will be italicized followed by my comment. Let's get started! "'I hate you, ...

Good night, Rhiasofia! The name's Storm, and I'll be doing a quick review for ya! Let's get started. :D Wow. Just wow. The imagery and symbolism in this is spectacularly ...

Morning, RavenBoy! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for ya on this rather stormy morning. (I don't know how your winter has been treating you, but mine has regrettably ...

Hey, Silverlock! It's Storm here to review for ya tonight! :D First off: Beautiful. The images that you conjured into my mind were incredible, and the beginning snagged my attention. ...

Hey, Dude! :D The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for you this afternoon! I noticed a few small mistakes that you probably just skimmed over, and not many content ...

Hey, Neo! (I keep wanting to make a Matrix reference. Haha) Anyways, it's Stormsie here, per your request! Shall we get right to it? First of all, I'm not a ...

Hey, Gravity! :D It's Stormsie again. (Oh my glob, I'm wearing my Wicked shirt right now. O_O Lol) This piece rings so much truth throughout it, and is an amazing ...

Hey, Depth! :D This is Stormsie, and I'll be your reviewer for tonight! Since this is a shorter piece, I'll just break this edit into numerical sections. :) Let's get ...

Hey, Bee! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for ya this morning! :D Let's jump right in. 1. "She got down on the first day, the wind ruffling her ...